The imagery, and the -- imagery. Wow. And Selphie's thoughts seemed really Selhpie to me, especially [No, no it wouldn't look like that.

That wouldn't be festive. The Spring festival wasn't about war or violence.] Using a Float spell on confetti-stuff! Cool idea.

...And the last few lines are /amazing/.

Wow. Very powerful imagery and emotion here. The last line sent a chill down my spine. I'm stunned.

Very nice imagery, especially at the end. Bravo!

Wow. Man. Wow. Great work!

short but good, i liked it

Yay, I'm glad I found another Selphie story. I like this story a lot. You're a good writer, keep up the good job.

oh! poor selphie! good job.

Wow, what an ending... nice way to finish it...

Write more if possible, as this is class

Awww. Lovely little fic. And all the better for not making Selphie a stupid hyperactive bimbo like some do (I'm guessing you also saw the little 'Selphie in the graveyard' scene in Trabia Garden)