I thought this was pretty good, hope you add to it. You've got a great chemistry between Maya and Finch without takikng them out of character (since their personalities conflict).

I see some definite romance for those two in the future! Great job thus far!

NO! Finch, don't leave! Can't you see that she loves you?

Aw, sweet so far!

thats a nice story but I don't think that Fich would ever fall in with Maya. Maya and Elliot were meant to be together and Finch was meant to go after certain girls but not her. Overall that was a really story

Please, update,please.

I want to know some more.

This is a good story

Please,please, please, update.

Great story!

Please,please, please.

don't stop writing

Maya and Finch forever.

this is a good story

Yay! Another Maya/Finch fic. Keep it up. This is sweet.

And hurry it up, will ya?

Oh, wow! That's so cute! You're doing something that most don't do in their stories: having the gal check out the guy! It's so cute! If I were you, I'd keep up more of that! Everyone just loves Finch's tiny little ass! :)

Yeah, that's pretty much what it I just meant that she was kind of looking at him dreamily and he didn't , not yet anyway :)

Oh, yay! You fixed it! When are you going to make the next chapter? Please hurry! This is great! I just have one question, when you say: "never seeing the soft brown eyes focusing on him from behind." What exactly do you mean? Is she checking out his bum? Lol!

Yay! New addition to yet another Finch/Maya story! I'm liking this another good birthday suprise! Though all my bday suprises seemed to come the night before, oh 's all good

But when are you going to fix it? Most of us haven't even seen the new chapter!

This story is so cool!

Please write some more.