-Huggles auther then scolds Althalus for being bossy.- I LOVED it. Keep it up ^^

this is really good
one or two spelling mistakes but other than that...
i can't wait for the next installment

OHMYFAWKINGGAWD! ok done with my little rant there. i absolutly love that book! i have read it maybe 6 bazillion times! i like the sheep part... quote "of course captain fighting sheep are very fasionable this year." LOL! THAT IS SO FUNNY! and sadly so far this is the only fic on here about that book! so thanks for your consideration for us people who like that one, and the title's great! Gher is FREAKIN AWESOME! 10/10 just cause i love ya! ^ - ~

UPDATE THIS UPDATE THIS UPDATE THIS!

I LOVE THE ALTHALUS STORY AND I WANNA SE IT GO ON AND ON AND ON!

(side note longer chapter would be nice)

I liked the way you put in the "tail in a knot" remark LOL reminded me of the god ol Althalus:)

One advice thoug try t make longer scenarios and write more Eddings style if you get my point.

Of course you do a great job alredy but...

I feel that this story would benifit from it.

Update soon or else i will die!!

Great start! I would like to see this continued!

Is there going to be more? oh please please write more, this is so good. PLEASE.

I have really liked your story today i have just finished reading the redemption of althlas for the 2nd time and i did it in 4 days. any way i would really like it if u continue the story and keep up the good work

Aw...Plz! Update!

Pliz! Update this story, I want to read more!

not to be pushy but please update its been BLOODY AGES SINCE YOU LAST DID PLEASE YOUR MY ONLY ACTUAL DAVID EDDINGS WRITER WHO IS GOOD AT THERE FICTION ON ALTHALUS AND CO PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!

^_^

You do know your settings are on 'don't accept anon. reviews', right? Cos normally people get more if you switch it off. ^_^

Update sn!

I'm reallt liking your story, it really captures the heart of David Eddings writing and characters

Beaut, love it. I get what's coming up so please, please, please, please continue on with it. beg you...beg, beg, beg

'Redemption' is my favorite Eddings book and i love what you've done here! Keep writing its great! From a constructive critism point of view, you may want to recheck some spelling. I caught a couple words that were mispelled.
Anyway, more please!!

cool story if u make any more make them longer plz