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Nix Wolfwood
2006-01-21
ch 1,
abuseAww, now I feel sorry for Lav. I hadn't before today...poor Lav.

But I love Seamus/Dean...they're so cute!
Skyla Moon
2005-08-16
ch 1,
abuseEep, present tense! *Smile.*

That was sad... poor Lav but yay slash!
Sapphire Dragons
2005-06-03
ch 1,
abuseAw. Normally I hate Lavender, but this, this gave me insight. *nod* excellent, as always. ^_^
Val Mora
2004-12-24
ch 1,
abuseI like the way you write her, but I think the last line needs a little work - it doesn't feel like it resolves anything, really.

Other than that, I really like it. ^_^ I feel so bad for her.
yoshimiwolfspaw
2004-12-21
ch 1,
abuseWow. Wonderful story, I'm putting it on my favorites list. It's kind of sad, I like the ending. Great job. ^_^
Lokaia
2004-05-10
ch 1,
abuseThis, so far, is my favorite of yours. Such bitter-sweet introspection, especially on Lavender's part since, like the Slytherins, you never get to see an in-depth look at her in the books. She's just the "gossip", along with Parvati... or was it Padma? Damn, which one's in Gryffindor? Oh well...
Oh, yeah--reiterating, loved this!
Just LeakyCauldron
2003-11-12
ch 1,
abuseHey...
Before I translate this (you remember? ;o) ), I have to review.
Hmm... What to say? In a way it’s sad. *sigh* But the story behind the story is sweet and that’s why I think the whole story is great. *g* Well done.
Bye, LeakyC
lala
2003-05-22
ch 1, anon.
abusewho's "you" really confusing
Shikala
2003-04-28
ch 1,
abuseTrue to life, true to characters; what else could I ask. Wonderful.
RainShadow
2003-04-04
ch 1,
abuseSad, but good. I like that Dean understands, instead of being jealous. So my question is... why Lavender? I'm fixated on Seamus, so I understand the whole minor character thing, but why her? just curious. good fic
Ayakaishi Fei
2003-02-16
ch 1,
abuseOh, poor Lavender. I'm actually really starting to like her, especially the way she's portrayed in so many fics.
I know what it's like to be second best.
It was so sad, yet oddly beautiful. Bittersweet.
Hush Puppie
2003-01-17
ch 1,
abuseAwwwwww.

*Sigh* Poor Lavender!

This piece is impressive. You make Lavender so bitingly real, it's impossible not to be sympathetic to her.
Summer Lyon
2002-12-30
ch 1,
abuseVery good! I wish you would continue with this story. I hope you get a lot of reviews for it.
Peace and Luv,
Summer Lyon
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