hehe that was sweet it is funny dog keep it up

Best fanfic ever! I love this!

um?

funny?

but a tad weird?

That was gross. And weird. Unusual though.

OMFG LOL

This story probably wasn't the must-see family hit of the year, but I sure thought it was hilarious. There were many points where I was literally bent double laughing. XD

As aforestated, your fics are so perverted it,s almost endearing. In a sick way.

Funny but short i was laughing all the way through great job!

Very funny

hahahahaha

P.S. GIMME UR GOD DAMN MUFFINS U FUCKER

you suck burn in hell who do you think you are this is nasty don't ever write any thing like this.[sorry lost control please don't be mad make something about paper mario 2

I shall review, then. *shakes head* Oy... Very odd. But very entertaining to read, at the same time. I laughed hysterically at some parts. *shakes head some more* That was the strangest thing I've ever read...

holyshit lolz

lol very funny

but whats with the muffens?

This is hilarious! It's one of those stories that always makes me choke while laughing! Write more; you have serious talent at writing risque humor!

P.S. I like the title for Chapter Two.

You need professional help. But you do make a good entertaining repulsive story. I like. But you still need professional help.