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Reviews For: Rituals

Wander52
2007-12-01
ch 1,
abuseLoved the kiss...
maddie
2004-10-11
ch 1, anon.
abusei love this story! really good one!
vigirl
2003-01-02
ch 1,
abuseGreat job, full of clever touches. I really like the way you used the rituals to frame the story, and the pacing of it. Gotta love flirty Geeks brandishing arcane knowledge! LOL! Very good stuff. Thumbs up, as always... ;-)
EOlivet
2003-01-02
ch 1,
abuseYay!!! What a wonderful fic -- SO much more than a New Year's fic -- it combines your talent for dialogue, description, atmosphere into this lovely super-vignette! And the pizza HAS to be a P&P shout-out. I simply love how you write the Geeks -- geeky to the fullest, but with an inherent element of sweetness. You take the characters we love so much and give them depth and substance the show could only dream of. You rock is an understatement. :) Keep writing!!!
WashDCChick
2003-01-02
ch 1,
abuseLoved it! Llllloved it! The poker game, the New Year's traditions, it was all so so good!
EveLGW
2003-01-01
ch 1,
abuseWow, what a wonderful way to start the new year :) So sweet, funny and beautifully written - I loved it!
CSIRMT
2002-12-31
ch 1,
abuseGood Lord - but don't we all wish!! Very nice - CSIRMT
Anansay
2002-12-31
ch 1,
abuseI have read most of your stories and have loved every single one of them. This is kept me going to the end, blocking out everything else. Your writing style really picks the reader up and brings them along a wonderful ride. The pace was great! I couldn't stop reading, especially towards the end, witht the time advancing. I was grinning like a fool, just waiting to see when, how he would do it. I like Grissom as the nervous school boy! He's cute that way. A previous story you wrote was the first I read about csi and it encouraged me to start writing some of my own. Images, I believe it was. So thank you very much for paving the way! Keep on writing! I will certainly read them! Look forward to your next endeavour!

Anansay
Kara
2002-12-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love this story! It was so in character from the awkwardness to the kiss. Beautifully done! I will be looking for more written by you...

2002-12-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseWell. I was going to just skim this one, but it drew me on to the end. Nice work.
Midge Wood
2002-12-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseGreat story, and the best beginning of anything I've read in quite a while.
Harrison Bergeron
2002-12-31
ch 1,
abuseThis story is DELICIOUS! Happy New Year to all!
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