besides the whole paragraph thing it was great! at first i thought that you may have been moving a bit too fast, but the kiss was really appropiate at the end. your writing makes it seem right. :) you're a great writer, keep it up!

I LOVE THIS STORY
PLEAZ
WRITE MORE

this is very sweet , but their should be more though. im not saying its bad just make more chapters or stories ^-^

I love it! Write more soon!

Why do people ALWAYS do this? When someone different speaks you start a new paragraph! You're also supposed to indent new paragraphs. My composition grader would kill you for this!

I loved it, it was very well writen.

Great story I just wish that it was me and not Eowyn!!

Honestly? This has got to be one of the cutest short fics I have ever seen!! Pretty original too, love it love it love it!!
Regards, and have a peachy day-
~Chi~

Cute ! I love this pairing

I loved it, write more and make it good!

I loved it, write more and make it good!

**silenced awe** That was one of the cutest things...! I can't believe...! Did you both...? How did you...? No way... Carrie? Wasn't writing romances against your morals or something? That was so cute! Great fic guys, short and sweet! Keep it up!

this chapter is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good! Please write more soon!!!

Awwww cute!

aaaaaaw... sweeeeeeet!!!!!!!!