semi interesting

why are you rewriting this

oh cool. i love this. please update

really nice but weird in a way because they are no plot and something. good job.

I love the story! I hope the other stories are as good as this one!
SEE YA LATER!
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Hi! Russa's the name, and really like your story "Master of the World". I always read all the chapters there are in fanfic before summiting a review. Anyway, again, great story. May sounds like a veryc nice girl, but a fisty one atc the same time. You don't want to get her angry (Ash neither). Though I don't really get the ending. What's loving May have to do withc becoming Master of the World? Oh well, Whatever. Well, I guess I can't wait to read your sequel now. Catch ya later! ^_^

haven't I read this before? I guess it dosen't matter, since not all of the people on here go to OUR SCHOOL!!!!! Anyway, I haven't read the whole thing yet, maybe you wrote more.
Your friend,
MYSTWriter

good start, please update soon! i can't wait to see how it turns out :) peace.

Christina