The last two chapters are the same, so you'll probably have to fix that.
That aside, I think these stories are fasinating. Very odd, but still interesting.

0.o The first chapter was great, but the second one is . . . a little strange. It was cryptic, butin a disturbing way. Still, dispit the implications of it, it was well-written and definatly provoked a reaction from me, so you did your job!

Augh! The suspense! just that snippet is making me want to read more! Dorothy and Duo?