you completed most of the story, but not all. What happened to the dragon riders? That needs to be told

YAHO! and another perfectly well written MARVOLOUS fic has come to an end, you should've described a little more about the characters when they returned to their rightful places, what happened to Alken, Nala, Hazuki, Gwyen and other but it endet nicely this way too. Hope to hear from you soon.

What a tremendous turn of events, absolutely amazing! This is the BEST story I've read since I'm a member on FF.

That's what I like about your fics, an action-packed chapter with a few funny scenes, keep up the good work

SUPER DUPER! AMAZING, action action as the eye can see, you're doing great with this and the other chapters, keep burning 'em up...

Well I must say the idea of the Lapras Statue was a marvelous idea, first thing that came to me was the Trojan Horse? keep up the good work

HOLY SPIRITS! That was an enternaining chapter as well as the others, action action action! Riot is dead too? that's just unfair

Everything seems to be in order so far, you did a really good job with the story altough Pokemon using human weaponry is a little od if you ask me.

HOLY JESUS! these chapters are really begging me to read on, the action/humor changes really is a great idea and the end with Nightslice and Firestorm battling withe the vines was a bit scary if you ask me.

HAHAHA!! this was one of the funniest chapter so far in this fic, I really laughed hard here.

COL man! I really mean it, the idea of Bahamut being the evil dude in this fic surprised me a bit and this Lombadra guy is more of a funny character (just like me LOL)

Ok first things first, even if Zian is a human-sized dragon how can Nala hold him in her arms? aside of that everything seems to be in order

So Kris and Nightslice is in Bahamut's body? that's a idea I hadn't expected, will Dracia or Luminair be here too? (don't answer that)

Count me in, Bahamut has returned! HOORAY!

Very well done, night. Just like your other fanfics, this one seems to have all that it needs to be really good. It had suspense, humor, and dragons (one of my favs.).

I've only read this one and the first in the series, meaning that I didn't read the second, but I do know what happens in it. This whole series basically has to do with Nightslice fighting away his own darkness, or something along those lines, am I right? You've made him one of my most favorite characters, with my most favorite one being my Fayt Leingod (Star Ocean 3: Till the End of Time's main character).

To me, your main enemy seemed to be kind of confusing to me. You say that he is the Knight Blazer, right? But then you also say that he is Kaiser. So, is he basically both of them?