It's so hard to find great fic written within the confines of the first KH game. This is one of them. Though I'm not super for or against shipping, the overall strength of this piece leaves the unrequited romance in the dust. Thanks so much for this, it's been on my favorite list for a long time but I never reviewed it.

I only have one thing to say... wow. I'm speechless, something that doesn't happen very often. This is fantastic.

Wonderful, even though I have next to no idea about what's going on since I haven't played till that part XD

Beutiful story, and wonderful writing style. I enjoyed Clouds first person perspective. :P I really enjoyed it.

Chevira Lowe,

I am sending you a nice review. YES, A NICE, WELL MEANING REVIEW. You are skilled in the literary arts, and your stories are well worth the read. I apologize for being so judgmental, and for smearing LOTSHA's review board with my snide profanity. I've read your profile, and agree. Mary-Sues are bad. I'm takeing my fic down...*sigh* (I need to stop giving missleading titles...)I think I'll work on my Riku/Cloud fic and post that. Instead of bickering, I'd like to hear your constructive critisisum. E-mail me, and maybe we can chat? Any way, I really like your writeing, and hope to see more of it. Keep working on your stories, and don't stop believing you'll succeed!

Sin-cerly,

Animage

This fic is, like, WOW! O_O I just love it to pieces... it's... well, very angsty and captures the characters perfectly. *two thumbs up*

That was quite...outstanding. Perfect manifestations of the human mind and the choicies we all have to make at some point, though not to such a poignant degree. Beautiful in sentence structure and inner thoughts, as well as the relationships between...everybody.

There will be more...right? I would be thrilled to read just a bit more, but, if not, I completely understand. You've developed this fic to where the reader should be capable of imaginint the rest of it with ease.

Well done.

*R-chan*

stupid story.

Ah, that was great! I don't think I could really find anything to be displeased about if I tried. Your charactization of Cloud and Riku is great and the way you tied everything in with the game. _ Is there more of this coming? It feels complete to me at the moment, but you didn't write owari so I'm guessing that this isn't done yet.

It's getting very hard to find good fics in this section, I'm glad I stumbled across your writings. _V

This was amazing. It is *so* hard to find decent fanfics in any genre, and Kingdom Hearts is no exception. Not only did your writing display talent, but the characterization was very, very good. I loved it. It's going on my favorites.

::gets dragged into review::

augh. x_x muse, why are we here? [trinculo: to find out the deal this girl has.]

what..

::scratches head:: okay. i saw your review in a mary-sue[ish] story. i'm trying to be nice.

when what i really feel is a TERRIBLE BURNING RAGE THAT COULD QUITE POSSIBLY IGNITE THIS ENTIRE FICTION TO CHRISTIAN HELL.

[trinculo: i'd quit while your ahead.] indeed. x_x

::scurries off::

Wow that was incredible! I can't wait for te next chapter. I love the way you describe Cloud...proud to a fault, doesn't need help from anyone! I also like the way the story revolves around him as he is my favourite character!

Please don't say you're going to make it a Tifa and Cloud fic...it would be far better suited to a Cloud and Sephiroth fic! Specially with the Sora and Riku pairing already there!

Well I really adored this. It is quite possibly one of the best fics I've read yet. I will be back to check on this again!

Buh bye

That's a gorgeous Cloud POV if I must say so myself. The cynical Cloud is so much harder to attain than that of a Cloud who cares (heh... FF7 vs KH)... although I still hate the aspect of AerClo, Kingdom Hearts and your fic here makes it seem possible that I might very well like that pairing soon enough.

It was way to confusing

Heehee... no idea who these characters are, but it was still kewl! *thumbe up* I would've liked it if you had updated Egypt!fic though... Ah well...

Oh! And I flamed that moron, btw. Thanks for pointing me in her general direction. But I suppose I shouldn't have mentioned that I don't believe in god, because now I've got this freaky bible-thumper bothering me, telling me that I should go to church and pray for god to forgive me *rolls eyes*

But oh! Look at what the little brat had to say in retaliation to my flame:

*makes a face at ayodbotla* You just need to get laid, honey. you're too uptight!)

*shakes head* Really... I'm kind of disappointed... (That's all she has to say?) I mean... she's only 14. I'm 16 next month and I'm still a virgin *buffs nails* So HA on her! *cough*slut*cough* _

Anyhoo... great work! I've no doubt you wrote this to show that little idiot what's what, eh?

Ayod Botla