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tcg/animefan
2006-04-13
ch 1,
abuseLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
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You made Merton die a virgin. We are mortal enemies until the end of time.

And it wasn't nice to make Jose involved in this. In reality, he wasn't Tommy's evil twin but a psycho killer robot who turned out to be a nice psycho killer robot with a holographic wife and kids to look after.

P.S. Your Comedies are to short.
The REAL Cheese Monkey
2005-05-03
ch 1,
abuseAha ha ha ha ha! Oh the pain if the ribs from the too much laughing!
DarkFate1
2003-08-15
ch 1,
abuseAnother brilliant story! I can't believe how much I laughed!
Be-Strong-Little-Marshmallo...
2003-03-07
ch 1,
abuseI remember those longs lonely days when you wrote this story (Actually, it was only ten minutes)
And you know, I still can't get the wrapper off those damn bottles. Oh well!
ME!!!
2003-01-18
ch 1, anon.
abusei didnt get it. OH WEL!!11!1 who's jose? was he n the real sho? I mustof missed tha epi!! NOOOOOOO0O0!11!1 good sroty anyway. BUH BYE!!1!
StormyWolfBowler
2003-01-02
ch 1,
abuse:) LMAO!!!! That was funny and hey, Goths RULE!!! But why did Merton have to die??? NOOOOOOOO!!!!! *Picks up tube of silly string and fires it around the room in a fit of rage* Oh well, you are the all powerfull author, who decides who should die and who should live... Well, what I'm really trying to say is.... I HATE SOURCROUT!!! and nice story too ;)
thesilverscreen
2003-01-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseLupa, you have finally reached rock-bottom.

Good job!
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