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| Verity Kindle 2005-10-21 ch 7, anon. | abuseExcellent writing. You really captured the "Sarkness" of Sark. The scene at the nightclub was really funny. |
| All Mighty Terrestrial 2004-01-12 ch 12,  | abuseFacinating! I love the different perspectives on this, and how closely the internal thoughts match or don't with the characters. Off to read season two! |
| All Mighty Terrestrial 2004-01-06 ch 4, | abuseFun read! I'll be back to read/write a better review later. |
| saccharine 2003-05-13 ch 12, anon. | abusepretty great. you've really captured sark's character |
| clementine1 2003-02-27 ch 5, | abuseHello. I had some time so I did reread these chapters for you. I can't see what exactly you changed because it's been awhile - I do think you've tightened it up though. I especially liked chapt. 4. The scene from Sark's pov - very realistic how you captured his growing awareness of who she was. It wasn't rushed and that was good. I've noticed you do your best when you take a scene slowly. You have the ability to make it very tense. I like that about your writing style. I said before, I like this story angle. It's especially great because it's one that can continue on and on. And I'm hoping it does. There's not alot of realistic Sark fiction out there which amazes me because I find him to be one of the most interesting characters on the show. Very inspired! LOL~clementine. |
| Druzilla 2003-02-26 ch 4, | abusereally good. two thumbs up! ~kasha |
| Druzilla 2003-02-26 ch 3, | abusefunny, how it's not Sark's lucky day. ~kasha |
| Druzilla 2003-02-26 ch 2, | abuseintresting. ;) ~Kasha |
| Druzilla 2003-02-26 ch 1, | abusegreat 1 chapter! ~Kasha (Dru on SD-4.com),Iceland |
| intriKate 2003-02-04 ch 12, | abusecool! i've liked this story. can't wait to see the next part! |
| chocolatequeen 2003-02-04 ch 12, anon. | abuseNo real suggestions, just make sure you make it clear in the summary that it's the sequel to this. |
| april 2003-02-03 ch 12, anon. | abuseI love it:-) A bit short don't you think? I've been waiting for an update, for couple of days. You better have more soon:-) Lol. just kidding. I love it. Can't wait to read the next part. |
| Mel 2003-02-01 ch 11, anon. | abuseGreat fic. One request: Please update soon! |
| april 2003-01-31 ch 11, anon. | abuseI love it:-) I totally love it:-) Is Cipher Sark's new appearance? Please more soon please? |
| april 2003-01-31 ch 11, anon. | abuseI love it:-) More soon please:-) Sark's next appearance is in cipher right? I want to know what he was thinking pleaseeee? I hope to read soon what happened next! |