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| tinkrbell225 2008-07-07 ch 1,  | abusegreat story very well written and i love the ray and janine twist in the end great job |
| Mlle. Dinkley 2003-01-07 ch 1, | abuseThis was a very intriguing story, one of the better RGB ones I've read on FF.net. I had trouble getting used to the characters having the same first names but a different family name, but that was all part of the fun of the story. As for your English, I didn't notice any gross errors, and I'm pretty nitpicky. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read another story out of you. |