Its nice but it is a little confusing though in chapter 12 Lara Croft died then in chapter 13 it was the clone ?!Agh I cant understand!(Slaps my face)('_')

Wow...this is deffinately going on my fav. stories list. THe way every chapter made you want to read the next, only to end it without knowing whether Lara or the clone died...then realizing the clone did.
In a rating of 1-5, I give this a ***. Congratulations, you've created a work of materpiece.
Ta!

-Shaye

good start! But remember, a new paragraph every time someone else speaks, like, "I said I was sorry." He glared at her. "Well, sorry isn't good enough," she replied.

It should be something like:
"I said I was sorry." He glared at her.
She replied, "Sorry isn't good enough."

And she can only become a Duchess if she marries a Duke.

it's getting still better!!!

cool! can't wait till you update!!!!