i loved this story so much it was so life like and just great

I never really understood what the note said and was she shot?

I'm not sure if I've reviewed this yet, but I know that I've read it before and really enjoyed it. I came back to read it again and decided to say (in case I haven't before) that this story is well written and well done! Great job!

I LIKES THE WHOLE NOVEL! IT WAS GREAT! NO WORDS...THX..CX

Poor Nancy , I know how it's feel with one parent

Perfect! That is what I would call it... It is filled with drama, emotion, tears and love. Its really a great story. Hope to read another story of yors soon... Till then keep going and keep rocking...

that is honestly the best one ive read so far on here and god know ive read about a billion of them i loved it the characters (i've been reading nancy drew and hardy boy books since i was like 7 so i know every character) to the plot was incredible ive always wanted a version of what happend to nancys mother THIS IS THE BEST BOOK I"VE READ!

OMG i loved this story

Loved it! It was a good story. I think you should deffinately cut out the cussing though. I'm glad Frank and Nancy are together, but isn't there some way to still be friends with Ned. I mean you can't make him a total idiot. He's a sweet guy. Aside from some typos, it was a great story! Do you have any more ND and HB stuff?

if Nancy is 18, it should be 15 years ago since her mom died

happy endings are always nice

This is a really good story! It's keeping me on an edge already! I can't wait for the second chapter!

i love it

That was really good!

It is good but it needs to take out the cuss words. It got my attention. Because I love Nancy Drew