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| Amy 2003-06-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseSydney "waddled" out of her bedroom? Ouch. That hurts. But other than that, I totally love your story so far! |
| twin*muse 2003-04-03 ch 19,  | abuseI absolutely can not wait! It sounds very exciting and breath taking! I love the whole idea with the number theme coming into play. Please have it out soon, I'll be waiting anxiously! thanx! |
| anika 2003-04-03 ch 19, anon. | abusei really enjoyed your review. it was written exactly as i imagine syd and vaughan to think, and i am looking forward to the continuation of the review. |
| Sprinkles143 2003-04-02 ch 19, | abusewow! forty-seven looks really cool! and i'm serious, i really can't wait to read it...i love number coincidences and those things. S/V all the way, and i love the portia thing too. can't wait till forty-seven's up - keep up the fantastic writing! --meg |
| Ryanne 2003-04-01 ch 19, anon. | abuseSounds good! i can't wait! Update soon! |
| stardust89 2003-03-23 ch 18, | abusethat was SO GOOD! write a sequle! u have 2! omg was that good !:D |
| Sprinkles143 2003-03-22 ch 18, | abuseaw, i'm so sad because it's finished but happy because it was a great story and a fabulous ending (nice cliffhanger there too, does this possibly mean a sequel?) anyway - you did a wonderful job, i throughly enjoyed the story (the action, the romance, it was perfect!) and i'll be looking forward to more of your writings! --meg |
| Colly E. 2003-03-22 ch 18, anon. | abuseI love the way you jumped ahead yet still gave us little pieces of the past of what happened in Vaughn and Sydney's lives! And LOVE the daughter's name! Love how you have everybody in the future and how Portia is connected to Irina. Can't wait for the next part!! GREAT cliffhanger in the end!! One question, did Weiss EVER settle down and get married himself? Just wondering! Update soon! thanx!! |
| Kimmers 2003-03-22 ch 18, | abuseLove this hope that there is a Squeal to this from Kimmers |
| Secret Agent Girl 2003-03-22 ch 18, | abuseo suspense at the end!! lovely,...portia...so good!! I loved the flash back moments too!! I hope you plan on a sequel what with that crazy ending...i wanna know who this guy is!! (SARK perhaps?) -SAG |
| Ryanne 2003-03-22 ch 18, anon. | abuseWhy would they still want to kill her?? Aw! the ending is so sweet! |
| buminit86 2003-03-22 ch 18, anon. | abuseOhh that was so good! is there gonna be a sequel??! |
| jhfortier 2003-03-22 ch 18, | abuseIncredible story! Kept my on the edge of my seat the whole time!! Great epilogue, I love the name Portia. Now i assume from that ominous ending that there's going to be a sequel? Can't wait!! ~Jacqueline |
| sara 2003-03-22 ch 18, anon. | abusehalarious, end with a cliff hanger would you? (acutally, I must commend your wonderful ending, and how you tied it all together.) Now here is my question. When do we get the next chapter? I really can't wait, and I know you would let it be anything but great. Thanks again for such a good story and please continue writing. |
| shannan 2003-03-22 ch 18, anon. | abusePLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL! this was so good.. i love the epilogue!! |