on it seems that the best stories get the fewest reviews.

this one was very sweet, although i didn't find it that sad - after all remus turned out to be ok. :)

This is really amazing. I can't think of anyhting to say but 'wow'. Great job.

oh god that was really sad
really sad

amazing and really touching
well done xx

wow, i really like that. this is the first time ive seen a fic where remus actually bites someone. well done!

hey this rocks write more
thanks bye from amber

*blows nose* so sad... its a bit confusing at times but beautifully written... when Lupin says "Aurora... why did you have to adore me so?" I thought he was using Aurora as a curse... hehe... ok I'm stupid. But just the idea is awesome... *blows nose again*

That was very dark but intriguing, extreme angst. I sincerly hope that you continue this and I admit I would be facinated with a prequal, the very thought of Sev pregnant is a bit of a paradox but I admit I would enjoy it imensly. Coming out of the closet; I love SS mpreg fics, probably because of his personality and the scope for various tangents. Anyway very good, I do hope you do more on this but if not it's a great stand alone piece.

louise

This is so...hauntingly beautiful. I love the way you described Remus as a man that was deeply in guilt and wishes for death. This is fabulous, thanks so much.

interesting.

So.let me get this strait(sp?).Remus bit a girl named..Aurora.who is the daughter of Severus and Sirius.and its Remus' POV.and Remus doesn't want to be forgiven
Right?

hmmmmm.... *very* good. I enjoyed that. The haunting style is one that I greatly appreciate. Will continue to read this.

Uh... It's beautiful, but I'm a bit lost in here. Is Aurora the daughter of Severus and Sirius, or did I just make that up since I want to believe it so. Is sirius the one who gave her birth?

It took me a bit to figure out the POV, but after than it was awesome. So sad though! Very well done *applauds*

Are you going to do the back story to this? Fill in the pregnancy and all that good stuff ^_-

Great!

Yes, this was lovely - even for me, who whole heartedly hates all the male-pregnancy fics. Poor Remus... didn't he siffer enough?