Reviews for Unforgivable
countesszero 10/13/09 . chapter 1
on it seems that the best stories get the fewest reviews.

this one was very sweet, although i didn't find it that sad - after all remus turned out to be ok. :)
plungers-rock-my-socks 6/22/08 . chapter 1
This is really amazing. I can't think of anyhting to say but 'wow'. Great job.
Nienna100 8/4/07 . chapter 1
oh god that was really sad

really sad
Rachel-Louise 2/2/07 . chapter 1
amazing and really touching

well done xx
ladyoficyblueyes 3/21/05 . chapter 1
wow, i really like that. this is the first time ive seen a fic where remus actually bites someone. well done!
hermoine04 6/22/04 . chapter 1
hey this rocks write more

thanks bye from amber
p r o w l i n g w o l f 6/22/03 . chapter 1
*blows nose* so sad... its a bit confusing at times but beautifully written... when Lupin says "Aurora... why did you have to adore me so?" I thought he was using Aurora as a curse... hehe... ok I'm stupid. But just the idea is awesome... *blows nose again*
louise 4/19/03 . chapter 1
That was very dark but intriguing, extreme angst. I sincerly hope that you continue this and I admit I would be facinated with a prequal, the very thought of Sev pregnant is a bit of a paradox but I admit I would enjoy it imensly. Coming out of the closet; I love SS mpreg fics, probably because of his personality and the scope for various tangents. Anyway very good, I do hope you do more on this but if not it's a great stand alone piece.

louise
izean 4/4/03 . chapter 1
This is so...hauntingly beautiful. I love the way you described Remus as a man that was deeply in guilt and wishes for death. This is fabulous, thanks so much.
sassw14 4/3/03 . chapter 1
interesting.
Wormy 3/1/03 . chapter 1
me get this strait(sp?).Remus bit a girl named.. is the daughter of Severus and its Remus' Remus doesn't want to be forgiven

Right?
ArchArtistWriter 1/13/03 . chapter 1
hmmmmm... *very* good. I enjoyed that. The haunting style is one that I greatly appreciate. Will continue to read this.
La Femme Fatale 1/11/03 . chapter 1
Uh... It's beautiful, but I'm a bit lost in here. Is Aurora the daughter of Severus and Sirius, or did I just make that up since I want to believe it so. Is sirius the one who gave her birth?
Kumie 1/7/03 . chapter 1
It took me a bit to figure out the POV, but after than it was awesome. So sad though! Very well done *applauds*

Are you going to do the back story to this? Fill in the pregnancy and all that good stuff _-

Great!
Saint-Olga 1/7/03 . chapter 1
Yes, this was lovely - even for me, who whole heartedly hates all the male-pregnancy fics. Poor Remus... didn't he siffer enough?
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