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| MOMOoo... 2008-08-28 ch 22, anon. | abuseano when are you going to update? i've been following your story for two years no i love it but... you stop at the god part T.T |
| Haywire 2008-08-26 ch 1, anon. | abusedamn. I think i wrote the comment too long. lol. i have typed A LOT and its all gone. aw. whatever. lol. continue from my last post, ... “Your affection,” the man piped up, with an emphasis on the second word. “I was aiming for your affection." |
| Haywire 2008-08-26 ch 22, anon. | abuseHey. Great story u have. Best KuroKura fic i have ever read, in fact. ^^ I've been hunting for any fanworks of this pairing and urs is the best of all. it seems u havent continued the story for a while, but i really enjoy ur story. i love ur attention to details, and ur characters are not OOC. And the last chapter isn't bad at all. i really enjoy reading it, actually. I LOVE IT. A lil bit of fan service wouldn't hurt. and if its a fan service, urs is a brilliantly written fan service that can make a reader melt (lol), and a great fan service isnt easy to write IMO. it needs talent and skill to write it out like that. it blends with the plot nicely and smoothly, too. so dont worry. Theres nothing wrong in writing fanservice. Big big big difference between random, meaninlgess, marysue-ish fanservice from a remarkably well-written fanservice. in my opinion, ur story is going great. u r talented. I dont know about the others, but i like the cruise part. (lol) the engaged part is simply brilliant. (LOL) really looking forward to next chap and see how the relationship between our 2 favorite guys develop. XD or something like that. oh my fav moment is when Kuroro tranfers his nen into Kurapika. theres nothing going much but your writing makes it sounds very sexy indeed. Your story is the hottest KuroKura fiction i've ever read, even though theres nothing physical going much between the two (tho i wouldn't mind in the least if they get lil more physical :P). lol. u made my day. cheers for KuroKura pairing~ oh and i like it when Kuroro made his move and Kurapika became resistant, confused, and had his mentality gone wild. so much fun seeing Kurapika flushed like that. hehehe. “Your affection,” the man piped up, with an emphasis on the second word. “I was aiming for your affection." |
| cyberkxk 2008-08-24 ch 1, | abuseThis fic is by far the best. How I love the way Kuroro and Kurapika treat each other.^^. Guess you're drown in work now, so I'll willingly wait until you can update next chap. Just please don't abandon this awesome fic.>. |
| reodavle 2008-08-16 ch 22, anon. | abuseI'll wait for the update. I'll wait as long as it takes. *determined face* So please, please don't give up on this fic. Don't abandon it. D; Please, please, please.. |
| sexy Seren 2008-08-07 ch 1, | abuseupdate it soon |
| Kalista Jia 2008-07-06 ch 20, | abuseALright, after reading this one last year, I was wondering if there is going to have any new update soon, cuz I am like rereading the story! GOD I LOVE IT! You problably have no idea but you should understand how a fan feels when they have NO IDEA What is going to happen next, unlike the author, so would you do us a great favor and update! *Puppy eyes* I can't wait for more seriously, the iler braceet part just made me crack, how I wish Kuroro has one too~drool! REMEMBER UDATE! |
| ArtStar 2008-06-20 ch 22, | abuseI really do hope you continue writing this. There's still some stuff that that was kind of odd and OOC but overall the beginning was genius. I love this story very much I hope you continue this one day. I want to know what will happen because this chapter does seem like a transitional chapter. But to tell you the truth I'm not so sure about the plot anymore. Is this more about their relationship now or are they gonna chase after the eyes and etc. Nevertheless, this story is so well written and so keep on writing! :] This story is awesome. |
| ArtStar 2008-06-20 ch 21, | abuseaww im so sad there's only one chapter left.. |
| ArtStar 2008-06-20 ch 20, | abuseAh it was nice to see Bashou again. It's a bit odd to see Kuroro kinda affectionate. But hey, that means more Kurokura :D |
| ArtStar 2008-06-20 ch 19, | abusewell...kuroro could killed them all easily..but that wouldn't have been fun huh? |
| ArtStar 2008-06-20 ch 18, | abuseAh he's trusting Kuroro a lot more now... |
| ArtStar 2008-06-19 ch 17, | abuseFor sure Kuroro is OOC here but...he's hitting on Kurapika :D haha But...stripper? lol Oh boy... |
| ArtStar 2008-06-19 ch 16, | abuseShoplifting clothes? Nah of course not but he would for a car? Haha it's just entertaining to see those two interact. I burst out laughing when Shalnark and Phinx stared at Kuroro and Kurapika. But to tell you the truth, I don't really like the one-sided Leorio/Kurapika. I can't picture Leorio loving him like that. Just friendship. :] Besides I can't see Leorio being anything but straight lol. |
| ArtStar 2008-06-19 ch 15, | abuseOh Shalnark! lol Great POV! Your interpretation of of his background was quite believable. haha My favorite part was when this: "He was reminded of a book he had once read, way before he had joined the Geneiryodan, when he was still dealing with teenage hormones and had tried to substitute the birds-and-the-bees talk that parents were supposed to give their children when they were of a certain age, by reading about it from romance novels bought cheaply from a local bookstore." Haha I pictured that in my head and giggled insanely haha. Best lines in this chapter! But I loved the part about Nobunaga's ermm...balls haha. Hilarious. Oh and the part where Kurapika asked if Kuroro wanted to drowned him in debt. aww cute. |