And as always I've found myself reading this again.

WAKKA KEYCHAIN?

As in, Final Fantasy X Wakka? -shifty eyes-

Beautiful. Perfect ending for a perfect fic.

Times like these, I really... wish I could think of more to write in reviews, ha. Seriously though, that feeling you get when you're having crazy fun, or finish a bloody good book, or cry at a film, or just laughing - you feel like that reading this fic. And those three words, they brought it all together in the most profound, and most simple way.

- Applauds you -

There is just so much about this chapter that makes it perfect. I don't much want to embarrass myself by acting all fan-girl and shiz, so I'll just keep it short and say how much I loved the way emotions were presented - the confusion, awkwardness, tenderness, and tension (both kinds, har har). And as always, sweet, sweet dialogue.

Materialised.

That is all.

^ ^; Amazing how into Xiaoyu's head you feel when reading this. Brilliantbrilliantbrilliantfantasticfantasticfantas...

B'z! -highfives Xiao- Girigiri! =D

Anyway, great chapter. I really love the way Wang just slipped the picture into her hand, subtle, smart. "I can almost hear Grandpa's voice; "Curiosity killed the cat, Xiaoyu." Eh, what does he know?" - Lovely line =] *races off to next chapter*

Awrite! So I'm finally re-reading this (been telling myself to do so for.. I don't know how long -- I don't know WHY it's been that long -- but it's been long enough for it to feel like a breath of fresh air) and have re-fallen in love with it. You don't usually find opening chapters that make the reader so comfortable with the fic, the characterisations were bang-on, and the humour used was adorable.

Now I'm gonna try to finish the rest of it. Tonight.

This whole chapter is just beautiful as well. I again can't really say more than that. The last three words summarised it beautifully, how she wants everyone there with her. Hwo and Mi to joke around with, Jin to love her, etc etc.

Every Xiaoyin fan should read this fic. Even the Xiaorangs. Honestly. I love this fic more than I love chocolate, and that's saying a lot. Don't you dare stop writing, because if you do I will come over there and draw on your face (I know, 'wth', but I was drawing as I was reading this XD).

Take care, your awesomeness.

Ah... This and Chapter 33 always make me smile. The memories are perfectly placed, and so is Jin's entry. I'd write more on this but... I cna't, its juts perfect, and it always has been :P

I love the start of this chapter. Your fight scenes are pretty good but its the way Xiaoyu tells everything that really makes me love this story. Its just wonderful and it makes 'Monochrome' and 'Never Ever' so damn unique. I mean, sure, there are fics where its told in first person, but this one just pwns them all.

“Miharu…” ... “How did it get to Friday so quickly?”
“Well, you see, Monday happened, then Tuesday, then Wednesday, then – “ - ROFLROFLROFL XD I forgot about that!!

It was refreshing to see a nicer, more playful Jin than in past chapters. This chapter always makes me smile and reinforces the Xiaoyin fan in me, which loses hope and drowns in the crap that's filled the section of as of late.

Please update 'Never Ever' soon? -puppy pout- rofl. Ah... I love this fic X]

And again, if you wonder why Chapters 17 and 18's hits go up, its me! Again. For the same reasons. And because of how awesomely mysterious and what not you made Jin out to be in this fic (great way to justify it btw, near the end). The 'cup size' thing in the previous chapter always cracks a smile on my face.

Oh!

And this line, without fail, always cracks me up to th epoing where I'm laughing out loud, seriously: "I'm sure it's not natural for your breasts to be at the same level as your belt buckle." - I had a teacher like this as well, she was a science teacher XDXDXD

Bout time I left a review on the best Tekken fic ever. I've only read it about seven times now XD

If you wonder why Chapters 10 and 11's hit counts continue to go up, its because of me. I read these two chapters so much, they're just freaking adorable. I love the way that Hwoarang takes away Xiaoyu's saddness, and their closeness is shown to the world in these two chapters. Seriously, I love it. It was these two chapters, and this fic, that reallt got me into Xiaorang.

But in all seriousness, this is fricken adorable X] -reads it again-

I really loved this chapter xD

Well, Wang is doing what seems to be his best for his granddaughter so I understand why he is training her all the time now :P

"Who's been keeping you up all night, I wonder?" Mi asks with a smirk.

"Baek."

Me and Miharu exchange a glance, and I open my mouth to offer my opinion on this little confession, but Hwoarang's look of indignation shuts me up.

"Training, idiot!" - LMAO, that really cracked me up xD

lol trust Hwoarang to bring up Xiao's kiss and it's good to see that Miharu is fine with it xD Just when she is about to leave, Jin has to show up lol. Seems that Xiao can't play the ice princess when she's in his presence - he is way too cute xD

Wow...so they had their first kiss then xD Awesome!! I can understand why Xiao is a bit pissed off with Jin and all that - Hwoarang, well he is the same as always (cheeky but arrogant with it lol). Maybe she was a little bit confused or embarrassed when Jin kissed her like that, poor girl lol.

lol it looks like Xiao weren't listening to Miharu and what she was saying. But yet again Jin is very hard not to think about as he is such a cute looking man xD Perhaps Jin is amused by her as he thinks she isn't all that in the fighting department or that he's just teasing her as he's fond of her lol.