great story

brilliant! sad, happy, nervewrecking, shocking and crazy... and romantic. very good!* thumbs up*

gret... just great... this sentence:
Instantly, Chibi Usa’s blush-O-meter shot through the roof. She shook her head hard a couple of times, trying not to imagine the possibility of walking in on Helios while he’s…well…

gave me inner pictures, thanks for that >/>

BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ, I SWEAR TO GOD! XDD *Claps hands loudly and adds to favs* Please please please please please make new chapters soon! =D

Wow, that took a while! Well done, I give you a lot of credit for planning all of that out. It's so rare to find good Chibiusa and Helios fanfiction, especially good long fiction. I'm off to read the sequels now, fantastic job!

i was astounded by this fanfic and i am so going to read the sequel.
it was the best sailor moon fanfic i have ever read and i am being completely honest about this fact.
i love all the description and how you depicted the emotions.
[[sigh]] if only my writing wasn't so lazy...

i am screaming 'yay' right now!
i luv ryu/ami and it was AWESOME!
i am so reading chapter 4 right now!

woah.
this chapter was really awesome too.
i am really enjoying this story so far.
helios and chibi usa are so adorable.
i hope he comes and makes an appereance soon.
i'm loving all the mystery to this because i have no clue what' going on...or is that just me?
well, hope the next chapter is good too!

I really like this story a lot!
I'm already hooked after the first chapter!
It's amazing how you got everything so detailed.
Expect another review on chapter 2 really soon!

Your story is wonderful so far. One thing you can always keep in mind if your memory fails you, and you're writting another Sailor Moon FF (you may have heared this already) is to find an episode where a detail may have been mentioned, Wikipedia has a list wth summaries, and them YouTube the episode. I do it all the time. I'm actually working on my own SM piece.

That would be cool to have a sequel! I liked the ending. Lol I see Chib usa is VERY anxious lol. Boy I would be to, and find the person I love in the futa lol! i loved this story alot! and I hope u have other succsesful chappies to so ja ne!

wow! never expected this! lol i am very surprised...wow! lol i ned to read lol ja ne!

No writer's block is bad! lol. I really did like this I am upset with Helious though. Well who wouldn't be lol ja ne!

Yay and cry lol. Chibiusa is mising but she is with helious! But he has to harm her...to protect her lol lots of ups and downs lol ja ne!

I actuallylike longer stories. I am writing my own and looking for inspirations. But apparently I didn't put it on fanfic. Yea the more I read the harder it is to stop and write in my story hehehe lol ja ne!