Great second chapter to the Cloud saga. I think Cloud should have just stopped Sephiroth when he had the chance, but I guess it was better not to enhance the powers of darkness. Anyways, great saga!

Me: Awesome continuation!! GO CLOUD!! WHOO!

Cloud8.9: Whatever...~tunes her out and listens to rock music~

Uhh ... he he ... umm okay I am going to say this ... come on Lilly you can do this!

I'M REALLY REALLY SORRY I LOVE YOUR STORY I HATE AERITH AND I'M REALLY REALLY SORRY!

*breathe breathe* Ah man, so very sorry dude i swear! Okay ... I didn't flame you ... I flamed Aerith! Sorry sorry sorry can I ever repay my stupid stupid mistake? Can I make you not hate me? I hope so ... okay you can flame me in return ... take a shot at Amber if you want! Everyone else has and you should 'cause i hassled your character ... kinda ... I'm so sorry!

I thought I'd read this anyway! umm ... Cloud's a little outta character but it's nothing too bad ... I had a little trouble sorting out the writing style it cut to and fro a little but again i do exactly the same thing!! Don't worry about it eh?! Umm ... oh I know there's something else ... oh yes I am going to get passed my despising Aerith and say this ... *breathe breathe* You're a very talented author and I highly respect you! I was a selfish, bitchy ... er ... bitch ... and I'm really sorry! It's amazing! I actually found a person who hassles Squall! I mean Leon! ^.^ and lives to tell the tale! It's funny I can see him narrowing his eyes and everyhting! very cool man really it is!

Again, I'm so sorry and I swear to never try and kill Aerith again ... it'll be hard but I'm trying!

You have talent and I was blind to not see that I'm sorry, from the corners of this concrete heart of mine, from the bottom of it, I am truly sorry, e mail me if you want to talk k?

Luv Lilly -_-"

I LOVED this!! Loved, loved, loved! :D I really wished they had gone into more depth about the Aerith/Cloud thing in the game, so it was great to see you fill in the 'holes'. Plus, this was just awesome. You should write more fics about them!!

i like da way u describe cloud. i jus wish ppl would stop connecting the FF7 world wif KH ~_~ anyways good fic! 3 out of 5

i like da way u describe cloud. i jus wish ppl would stop connecting the FF7 world wif KH ~_~ anyways good fic! 3 out of 5