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CharmedOneForever
2006-10-04
ch 16,
abusewhat a great story! I love the twist about Leo! Please update asap! :)
iheartgreenday
2006-02-23
ch 16,
abusewow...I haven't cried that much since they split Piper and Leo up on the show! I'm off to read the next one!
Bules
2004-10-05
ch 16,
abuseTwist is the understatement of the century! I just finished reading both stories and looked to see a sequal and only saw the prequal. Are you going to continue on with this story or just leave us hanging?
Luv2rite
2004-03-31
ch 16,
abuseAnother great story. Luv Luv Luv
piperlover/leo
2004-01-25
ch 16,
abusethat was great update soon
Silverado
2003-08-28
ch 16,
abuseyou just dont seem to be 16...
If you really are 16, let me tell you that you are very mature. I am sure your parents are very proud of you.
Congratulations...for your story...it was delightful, and congratulations for being such a nice guy (I can tell that by the comments
you make at the begining of your chapters.
Hope your family and grandparents are ok. I wish you well. Big kiss
kate
2003-05-31
ch 16, anon.
abuseoh what are you waiting for?!! hurry up and do the sequel to this!! i really cant wait any longer!! this is the best story!! and i love all the unexpected twists! its great!
Aria184
2003-05-26
ch 16,
abuseokay, you CANNOT end it there! No way! LOL... don't you hate it when people tell you that? Seriously, though, you are going to write a sequel, right? Also, did you find your deleted folders, by any chance? I hope you do! Good luck with that.. and please write a sequel soon!
Aria184
2003-05-26
ch 15,
abuseI like that theory... it totally makes sense! Sorry about your accidental deletion of your files. Do you have a recycle bin on your computer? Because if you deleted it, it probably went in there... and then you can find it and restore it. That has happened to me so many times... I can't even count. Great chapter! Keep writing!
Aria184
2003-05-26
ch 14,
abuseaw... how sweet! Good memory... keep writing!
Witch
2003-05-25
ch 16,
abuseOMG! OMG! THat was so amazing! I'm so glad Leo's alive. I hate you so much you're so talented i wish i could write as good as you can! :: Curses quietly to herself :: anywayz brill story i hope you continue it real soon!
Witch
2003-05-25
ch 11,
abuseI don't think that Piper was too happy in this chapter i think that i wasa good idea to have a slightly more upbeat chapter because then you could perhaps work in a relapse intpo her depression in the future. But hey this is great i can't wait to read more! Witch
kangaroo
2003-05-23
ch 16,
abusei only just found the story so the review is late. ok, very late! liked the story (have already read believe in me and the one where piper was raped when she was 14, liked them too by the way)you write the bonding scenes very well, specially the flashback and the bridge thing. i agree with charmed writer you are very creative and oh my god the twist at the end!! you said there would be sequels soon so i guess that was just a very suspensey, cliff hanger way to keep us interested huh? i find your stories very easy to get into and can be totally absorbed for ages, i guess its the way you describe and write but i always know what is happening but not quite what will happen nxt, just the way i like it. sorry that this is a long review but i did an english exam today and am focused on anylysing every little detail so i'm v sorry.
Woulnt-You-Like-to-Know
2003-05-19
ch 16,
abuseGenius...pure genius... that is what you are...i love it! The plot...a Leo clone, torturing Piper...wait...is the baby dead or not? ohmygod! I love it! update soon!
scrawn
2003-05-10
ch 16, anon.
abusethank you :)
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