hahaha! they're so cute!

haha cute, great read ^_^
~the dreamer

cute

Wonderful, amazing, excellent!

Ahahahaha! That was GREAT! Chewtoy, hahahaha, so cute ^_^

Lol, I liked this! Works really well! hehehe! *heart*

Really good!

That. Was. Terrific. Awesomely done. 10/10

This is so cute, and so surprisingly in character. I don't normally read one-shots, but I enjoyed this one. Thanks for sharing ... though you're right, the formatting IS awful.

My grin is evil.
Evil and happy.
Thank you for writing a fiction in this narrative mode; it was very interesting to read from the point of view of Naruto talking to himself ;D

hehe that was really great! and i loved the use of second person! :D
reeby

Well, **. That was fabulous!!

Amazing style, really. I loved it!!

LOL!

love et

-fav'd-

Love it! Voluminous and vociferous in brevity. Awesome :)

Love it! xD