This is so good! I cant wait for the next chapter!

Wow! This is rly good! :)

Oh snap for Pan

This story is really cool, you really made Trunks the dark, powerful Saiyen...i like that. But since your last update was like almost 3 years ago, i doubt we'd be seeing another chapter from you...oh well. it was good while it lasted.

Good story, write more.


The Psychotic Cherry Blossom

awws, have you abandoned this story? I'm not even a huge DBZ fan but I really enjoy this story, would love to find out what happens next...

i love this story and it has a great story line please please update even if it has been a while

Hey, hey, hey! Come on update! I wanna read more! Please! :D

great story so far but noupdate? what has become of you?

i couldn't stop reading this story please update.

Hope you update soon

hey... i probably haven't reviewed this chappy and even if i did you prob arent reading this but FRICKING HURRY UP AND UPDATE!

-Update or Die
Animepunk5243

please update I want to kow what is going to happen next

Love the story...update soon??

^_^

I love this story amazingly written. You must update son!