Erm, why does Eriol need a big brother? Especially Touya? He's old enough to be Touya's father, literally.

Hey, that was very sweet. Tori (I use dub names) is acting like a brother to Eli, but here's some trivia

Clow Reed has to incarnates-Eli and Aidan. So that means that Eli is Sakura and Tori's half father. Weird, huh? A lot of ES stories mean a bit of incest.

I love it. I simply adore this. grins I stumbled upon this story by accident, but I'm glad I did! This is so well done, so tender and touching. I'm wishing I knew more of the story now though...if all your fics are along these lines I'll have to sit down and give them a chance. Very nicely done.

nice story. Kaho and Eriol make a horrible couple, good riddance. But I'm not too sure about the Touya and Eriol thing.

It makes sense, doesn't it, and yet I've never seen anyone make this connection before. Great job, well done. I really enjoyed reading this!

Touya! Your "big brother" senses are going off! Sorry inside joke.

"That's Sakura's line!" Aww...didn't know you cared Touya! *snickers*

Very intresting fic!

Wow! This is really nice. But I thought it was my understanding that Kaho was "inlove" with Clow and not necessarily Eriol himself. *shrugs* I really do not cared for Kaho and I do believe Touya and Eriol are better off without her.