 Smaragd 2/26/07 . chapter 10Damn. That was really good. It was dark and twisted and I loved it. |
 Nadia Frey 5/30/06 . chapter 10I'm fairly certain that I told you that this is my favorite Saiyuki fic of all time, but I thought I'd post it here for all the world to see as well. |
 aditou 2/13/06 . chapter 10Ay...0_0 Amazing! |
 AOM 5/24/04 . chapter 10 I hope you don't mind me just sitting here and marveling at how you put all those things to words. Especially the way you manipulate the readers' feelings. |
 Lacewing 12/26/03 . chapter 10man, what a story! This was great! Loved it!
*shudders* Ni so scares me.. he's like.. eww..
Can Yaone kill him now? |
 UltraM2000 10/7/03 . chapter 10 I didn't review this before? Dang!
I absolutely loved it, and the wonderful use of language within the fic. Yay for Yaone! She's likeable as long as one keeps her away from Hakkai ;)
Good job, VERY good job. |
 SeaGull 10/5/03 . chapter 10 A mouse's integrity doesn't taste like poison, it tastes very very good...
Thank you again |
 crankyhermit 10/3/03 . chapter 1Niice. Little mouse is all grown up now. Poor mouse. |
 sf 10/3/03 . chapter 10 And one can't help but wonder : How does she /do/ it? How does she write hope and hopelessness, love gained and love lost, and a whole other spectrum of human feelings into one single chapter made of words alone?
So, yes. I loved it. (I assume this is the end?) For the wont of a better word, this work is more real than anything I've read in a long time.
Beautiful closing. Beautiful characters. I'll never see the Kougaiji-tachi in quite the same way ever again. (And Nii. Dear gods, your Nii is deliciously evil.) |
 SeaGull 9/14/03 . chapter 9 Hm... (purring sound)
A little swimming in the dark waters of a mind... I like the way you create writing around a picture we all know...
Gyokumen like-reptilian demeanor sounded so gOd ! (Maybe it's the pattern of green/blue/cold colours, but she reminded me the passage of TLOR when Galadriel is tempted by power). A new meaning for lethal beauty, ne?
The contrast with Rasetsunyo (beautiful - as it could be expected...)'s appearence was wonderful.
Thanks again
Les choses sérieuses commencent...
PS to anybody reading that : If you like Nîi-like characters, could I suggest you Stephen Donaldson books ("the mirror of her dreams" , and the sequels, -warning spoiler- where Eremis could make your day...) |
 sf 9/14/03 . chapter 9 Beautiful. Astounding.
Inspiring. _. *takes notes*. |
 sf 8/30/03 . chapter 8Did I mention that I love your chapter titles? _
One wonders why Nii would be in the Sanzo get up. Any chance that it'll be explained? |
 SeaGull 8/26/03 . chapter 7 As good as always. Eager to see what Yaone will found in the mirror of her/Kou’s dreams... Howan Hakase appearence was greatly appreciated : it ‘s one of the charac who is the more intriguing to me. And anime is quite mute about her motives (you rocks).
Good to see a fic where Yaone is not a weak little creature (I still remember her smile in Vice or Justice episode when she is tortured : I’m sure she can be full of surprises)... Doku is a little absent... Will he come back on the stage?
Bye |
 sf 8/16/03 . chapter 7Through the looking glass, hm? Wonderful writing, as always. And such great ideas. |
 SeaGull 8/4/03 . chapter 6 Hi!
It's such a rarity to find (good) fics featuring the kougaiji-ikkou, that's why I really enjoy your stories (as the humor ones as the angst ones...). Please, go on with this one !
Crap, such few words to tell you how much I love this story. Too bad the brainwashed Kou part is not available in the anime !
Use Yaone POV was a good idea (and you use it vrey well : chapter 3 was the best...)...
Thank you for you story
Hope reading you soon
SeaGull |