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sarah parkes
2006-07-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseI LOVED THIS CHAPTER! it was so realistic and I could just imagen that whole chapter in my head and it was really good. You did a wonderful job on this whole story but i loved the 1st part the most
MySoap
2006-05-29
ch 19,
abuseI really, really love to read your stories. Its so sad that you vanished :)

many greetings and thanks kerstin
Ashley
2006-03-05
ch 3, anon.
abuseI love the story but I found a mistake. Sara's parents aren't alive and Grissom knows that. Great story though despite that
CarbyluvYTDAW
2005-03-03
ch 19,
abuseOkay, so I realize that your wrote this almost two years ago, but I still feel the need to give you a review on it. You said that this will probably be the last time that you write a romance, but I think you should know that I would consider this a crime. I don't know how hard it is to write something, but I can tell you that I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. I really hope that someday in the future you will reconsider and grace all of us hopeless romantics with another awesome story. (>-)
Jessica
2004-01-12
ch 19, anon.
abuseGreat story! Write more like it! Please?!
Little Bug
2004-01-09
ch 19, anon.
abuseI thought this to be an action romance, and it was a pretty good one. Good writing.
*L.B*
me
2004-01-02
ch 19, anon.
abuseA great love story. Great work. I do hope you consider more romance in your future and G/S's future.
randy
2003-12-19
ch 19, anon.
abuseOh I'm glad I stumbled over this one! Awesome story! I really enjoyed it.
*Randy*
Pheo
2003-04-24
ch 19, anon.
abuseAmazing story! I usually don't stick around for such long ones, but man, I was hooked! I hope I get enough sleep for class tomorrow, ha. I didn't see much improvement needed-- you had a great grasp of balancing the romantic nature of the piece and the interrogation/forensic side of it. Oh, and btw, great portrayal of Gris--something that's rarely accomplished. Well done.
Karin1
2003-04-22
ch 19,
abuseFinally had the time to read the last chapter of your wonderful fanfic, Dana. Sorry for not reviewing sooner, but here I am telling you how much I loved it. I have a huge smile on my face right now with this last chapter. I love happy endings!
Although I'm sad to see this fanfic end, it sure has been a fantastic read. This story has definitely become one of my favorites because of the excellent writing and characterization. You may think that you can't write love stories, but we all disagree! You are fantastic at it and I think you have something here you can really be proud of! Amazing job!

*~* Karin *~*
J. Rockwell
2003-04-16
ch 19,
abuseMiss Jane that was lovely. Simply wonderful. The chemistry you established between those two through this piece was great. This is the best example of in character depth of Grissom and Sara as a couple that I have read thus far.
It's beautiful. I do hope to see more of your writing around here somewhere.
*Jorgy Rockwell*
Duckfeat
2003-04-15
ch 19,
abuseDude, it's up to you, but this was a beautifully written story. One of my all-time favorites. A definite tribute to your skills. I just hope you're not giving up on the GSR. I'll go into mourning, I swear.
thousand-miles
2003-04-15
ch 19,
abuseWOW, thousands WOW. You say you're not good at writing a romantic fic well I disagree. It was AWESOME!! And you know I would tell you if I didn't like it. This last chapter was great though for a moment I saw myself pinned against the door by Grissom. But...unfortunately for me and luckly for Sara it was Sara. Damn...I will just dream about that then. Anyway...it was great, you know you ROCK! My Queen Dana, it again was a beautiful piece of art and I am deeply impressed!!
Geena
iheartcsi
2003-04-15
ch 19,
abuseyou've done it again, jane. you make this look so much easier than it is! i loved it!
Peggie
2003-04-15
ch 19, anon.
abuseJane, sorry to see this story end. You are such a wonderful writer. I'll be anxiously awaiting your next story - even if it isn't a love story, I know I'll love it!
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