yea, it would be a shame if you abandoned this fic :] come back soon

interesting story u have there! plz update soon ne?!

Please continue this. I am interested to know where you will take this next.

*puppy eyes* pretty please~?? *hopeful look* I'd read this if you even went so far as to turn this into a YuffiexCloud! (ick!) Or at least sketch down what you had had planned so we can see where this might have gone? Pretty pretty please??

Wow. I am loving the fact that you are building a real story. It's keeping me intrigued, and that means fine quality material. I can't wait for the next chapter, it's really starting to get exciting. ^^

And you, you're such a big tease with your little hints right at the end of each chapter. You've set yourself up very nicely for a great next chapter, and more after that if need be. =)

Very good job. =)

Almost nobody cares about little mistakes. We mostly live for the plot. I really hope you update this again, though (I was looking at your profile) I wouldn't mind much if you felt the need to change it to zackxcloud. Just don't scrap it please! *hugs story* I really like the idea behind this. It seems very cool. I am sure that I will love it any direction you decide to take.

Can you please try to work on this? At least try?

Don't let ZC usurp the throne... Lol. *sigh* But there are already so few good SC fics out there... *sigh* Well, it's sort of weird to still be holding out for an update this many years later, but I can dream, eh? :P

whoa! nice! And i realize you haven't been updating for a while (did I read wrong or did it say 4 years?) but I still hope you'll update because this seems really good. And I love your tiny almost-but-not-really-cliffhangers.

--Dark

Continue...? It's only been four years. :)

One of the best FF7 fics I've read, and it just started! Nice job and very realisitic, I love the way you wrote Cloud and the other charecters. Nice job.

this is one of the best FFVII fics i've read in a while!

your style and sense of wording is amazing and i love how you bring all the elements of the game into the story!

;_; Vincint and Cid dont get married...;_;

:) Wonderful. I'm looking forward to more when you can complete it. It was very well written, too, which is always a plus. Please don't give up on this. If you do, I'll never know what happened, and... ...would you mind if I bribed you for more? (You can have my first born?)

Great start! Are you bringing all three back? Hope so!! Will Sephorith remember everything he did? what's going on with all the attacks? Keep going, please!

oh youve forgoten this fic hvnt you...its been a long time since you updated...well its good im glad to read the little bit that exists. You have been recently working on other stories maybe u could take sum time to update this one...i mean it does have potential.. (please).

I think this is really promising, more than I've seen in FF7 in past couple of months. I love how you write as well! Please write more (quickly ^^;;), I'm really curious about what's going to happen...