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| chickloveslotr 2007-09-23 ch 8, anon. | abuseNO! You can’t stop there!! This story has such great potential! I |
| LanHikari2000x 2006-09-13 ch 8,  | abuseYes, it was good. |
| Angel Born of Darkness 2006-03-24 ch 8, | abusewtf? hes going to be Ash wow |
| storywriter10791 2005-06-28 ch 8, | abusethis is great! Please, udpate this as soon as possible! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Etherelemental 2004-09-15 ch 8, | abuseWell, I'd say that it's more than okay really. Though, I'm still trying to kind of figure out all the intricacies in this, but overall it's quite good. I'm just wondering what events will follow after this. Also, I can't help but wonder what'll really happen to Ash after Richie looks like him. That and how he'll be turned into an Eevee. Anyway, please update soon. I'm really enjoying this! ^_^ |
| star's dreams 2004-08-31 ch 8, | abuseSD: Now that a great twist. I never would of thought Richie would be related to Goivanni. |
| Bayleef 2004-08-21 ch 8, | abuseHey TMP! Long time no review huh? I thought I had you on allert... guess not... This story is awesome! I only guessed it was Richie moving towards the end... good twist! They look loads more related then Ash and Giovanni. Awesome story! You where in China? Cool! I liked it ^^ but when I saw Richard I thought Rick ^^; heehee... Good luck with your next part! Bay Bay! Bayleef |
| Silver Moon Phoenix 2004-08-12 ch 8, | abuseWhat an interesting plot! I love it! I never expected that Richie would turn against Ash, but we have to expect the unexpected. Update soon! |
| Goldamon X 2004-08-11 ch 8, | abuseInteresting chapter. I hope that you update soon. Also i am trying to decipher that prophecy from earlier. But i am short on info... need to see what happens later. Oh yeah update sign of the thunder bolt. |
| clara200 2004-08-07 ch 8, | abusehmm very intreasting. |
| clara200 2004-08-07 ch 2, | abusevery cool fic. |
| Crystalstorm 2004-08-06 ch 8, | abuseGood chapter.Hope the next is up soon.Ja. |
| Domingo 2004-08-05 ch 8, | abuseAwesome story! Try to update quickly! |
| Firehedgehog 2004-05-26 ch 7, | abuselarge eyes and eyebrow twitches, you are going to get to ashs point opf view soon right? |
| Deja Know I Been Lookin For... 2004-03-18 ch 7, | abuseYuh ohs, what's gonna happen? I've been hooked, now gimme an update! MORE! Please?!?!? |