Your writing style is really good and you capture the characters really well. I especially like crazy Spike :) well i like Spike in general but there you go. pleeasee up date real soon x

This story is the best spike recoving from soulyness I've ever read. Please please update soon!

please finish the story
it is getting ** good
write more

I luv Spike!lol. P.S.- UPDATE PLEASE! *HUGS!*

Get fresh blood! But he's back to normal! You know Im reading this and seeing it in my mind, movie-like. Its so cool. The bloodied water, him nearly whispering Bit. The despair in his eyes and the resignation..
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Raoul wasn't that bad."
- hahaha, Raoul couldnt have been bad at all.
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What kind of name is Raoul, anyway. Sounds like a pansy name to me."
- hey! so says the guy whos named after the tortures he inflicted on- whoops, might not want to mention that at his present condition
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dont take the mug! dont drink it! no, no no!
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what! it ends there! update soon? its been a long time sinceyou've updated... you cant leave th chapter like that! oh arhh

Our master is in pain and he called to us!"
- your what?!
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Your master?" Buffy shouted back incredulously
- ok, wow. That was definately disturbing
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Well, at least it didn't break off. I like these boots'
- i never understood that. I have trouble going down stairs in heels and she kills vampires in them. go figure. not that i wear heels that often, lmao, im all for my boots
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Kinda like Johnny Depp with fangs.
- HELLO! Come back, wait, Raoul you said your name was! Free blood here, New Jersey, I'll go there, wait- no- hang on..
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Angel was polite. All dark knighty and chivalry-like.
- that was a tad awkward. all dark knighty? lmao
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He lfet Max alone with the demons? Is he going to resurrect them?
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She wouldn't be casting any stones any time soon.
- i knew i liked Willow for a reason!
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Oh please find a cure! Poor Spike!

Inside he was fuming and wanted nothing more than to reach across the room and rip the blonde vampire's head from its shoulders.
- I admire his restraint? lol
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seemed to be coughing up blood.
- in humans thats not good. in vampires thats got to be catastrophic!!
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don't think that.that other vampire we know ever got sick when he got his.
- no, Angel just wandered the streets starving for century and a half wondering at what his purpose is, what he should do, contemplating death...
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William? Hes REALLY far gone if he called himself william. William the poet
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And they can always burn the house down if they can't get you to come out."
- Ive never realized that before! They cant come in (got that, months of studying vamp books) but yea! If they burn the house... awesome!
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this is such a good story so far! I stand in awe of the greatness

Spike's limp form, now unsupported by Buffy and Xander's arms, dropped listlessly to the ground.
- geez! Could they hurt him anymore?
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"Hey Buffy, this bag's full of blood!"
- examine it!
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NO! Dont take them! burn them, kill them!
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Something really bad must have happened to him to provoke a reaction like that.
- Do they not see the self-inflicted wounds! and they dropped him and almost broke his jaw. that counts as something bad that happened to him. lol
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"Pervert."
- m... perfect
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blood tears. oh god! I read about that, vampires only cry or sweat blood when their in the utmost agony. damn it!
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Don't you EVER blame yourself for what you did!
- WHY?!?!?! damn it! She just admitted it!
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And now Max is here, that cant be good... vampire, blood, how're they going to explain that?

Unless you really are feeling a vampire that is.
- yeah, that would be Spike. Pain consumed, suffering Spike
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Well, except for all the you know, death."
- lolol thats the difference! wow I hadnt noticed
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If not, he could possibly recover, given enough time to do so.
- GOOD! There's a cure. I love that there's a cure
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Well anyway, I seem to remember him getting poisoned by an arrow.
- GR! The ARROW!
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I mean, for a minute there he started to sound like his crazy ex-girlfriend."
- Drusilla. I loved her, she was such a cool character!
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"Harmony?" Willow asked.
- ugh Harmony, she was always so ditzy and stupid. Why would she remember Harmony over Dru?
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Buffy punched Spike with all her might, knocking him cold, and possibly even breaking his jaw in the process.
- VIOLENT MUCH! eesh as if he wasnt in enough pain already. she can no longer ** about him hurting her, she crossed the line. thats it
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She hadn't liked what Buffy had done to Spike
- yay Dawn, someone who has some sense in their brains left to rationalize
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was a patchwork of bloodied abrasions, bruises, and what looked like self-inflicted scratch marks.
- Ok *WINCE* damn!
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NO! Dont call! Max is going to come too and then Spike will be right where he wants him to be! Dont call! BAD RECEPTION!
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"Hey, maybe it'll be just like old times." At Buffy's look, she amended her statement. "Or.not?"
- Im REALLY hoping not
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Having dead boy jr. silenced for a while seems like a blessing to me.
- beg pardon!! When he's like THAT!
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But she had touched him, she had felt.it was impossible.
- what! whats impossible!
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warm? but he's a vampire... vampires dont get, lol, warm

If you want a beta-reader... I'm free. I havent beta read anyone's work in awhile. If you want to email me I'd be more than happy to help.
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Willow called to Max's back, not noticing the smug smirk on his face.
- this doesnt bode well for the future chapters.
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I'm not one to turn down free food, I'll be here
- very smart man. lol
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Who would have thought he'd be successful in life after high school?'
- wow. lol. that sounded really strange, but I agree. Xander was the fun-loving, happy-happy guy and he's the most sucesful of them all
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I didn't nearly kill him, I merely bumped him a little.
- LMAO!
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He had to hide a satisfied smirk at their shock
- GO XANDER! TAke that stupid **-mook teachers!
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'Not to mention the fact that Angel left, Riley left, hell even Spike left her.'
- he makes it sound like it was all their fault!
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GOOD! Someones going to find Spike! yay!

He had seen Spike's duster hanging on a hook in her closet.
- lucky girl
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Why she kept it, he had no idea.
- 1. Its awesome. 2. Its Spikes! 3. well, uh, its Spikes!
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Not to give you the wrong impression, my hearts all with Angel, but I watched Buffy for Spike when Angel left.
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However, corpses also didn't mumble to themselves nonsensical words over and over again.
- ok, thats never good. fun, but definately not normal sounding. whats normal anyway? ok anyway back to the story
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He didn't deserve anything but the pain and torment for what he had done.
- oh COME ON! He's starting to get the Angel persona now! Snap out of it Spike!
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Oh no. And Willow still having the darkness inside her, what'll happen when she realizes that Ma- er, the wizard is going to try and kill them all?
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Sure, Reily had had a farmboy, earthy charm and handsomeness, but he wasn't near as downright beautiful as Angel and Spike were
- REily! Oh GROSS! I hated Reily. I couldnt stand him, he was the Mary-Sue of guys. angel and spike, much better.
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He may have looked regretful afterwards, but that didn't change the fact that he tried to
- what! She should speak! She sent Angel to hell. Now shes saying that one incident! Sure she was regretful after but that didnt stop the torture and pain Angel went through did it!
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She had left him for dead in that alley without even a backwards glance.
- yeah! and that too!
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And yet, even after that, Spike had come back to her, still looking for her approval, for her love.
- UGH! DOES that mean NOTHING to you!!
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And now Xander's doubting himself. All Max needs to do is lay on the guilt and BOOM there goes Xander too...

but something about him made her feel a little uneasy.
- good. so far Xander AND Willow have gotten 'feelings' off this guy. I hope they follow their instincts..
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It makes me sound too much like some old wizard
- how ironic
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Violet eyes? AWESOME! LOVING THIS CHARACTER
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Their seemed to be something similar between the two
- magic of course, now if Buffy could put 2+2 together and realize the danger they're in...
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Only the purest demons deserved to live.
- oh no. another 'must purify the world of half breed' guys.
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Poison the vampire's food, and watch it slowly die of a mixture of the ingredients of the poison and of starvation
- UGH! THATS HORRIBLE! What i read of your summary, Im flinching for whats going to happen in the later chapters
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NO! Spike WHY! How could he DRINK it! Didnt he ever learn not to eat something or take blood from strangers? Ok well blood in packets. better?

Guidance Councilor Buffy
- who would ever have thought! lol That was just: wow
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Driving is way overrated. I take my road test next month... I would much rather be commandering a pirate ship or riding a horse. Its not because i CANT, its because its just... boring
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Watch it, I'm fragile, ok
- lmao. Aw... Xander, big macho tough construction man getting beat by two sisters. lol
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Cool, what an entry! Max, hehehe long story, sounds like a cool character already. yay

Thank you SO MUCH! You wont believe how grateful I am that you actually LIKED it! lmao! If you want to go back and review all the chapters... im not going to stop you. hahaha, meanwhile I'll be reviewing your stories...
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It wasn't necessarily smart enough to fear for its own life, but it was smart enough to know what it wanted.
- and thats scary enough isnt it.
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Before the week is out, Spike will die. I will make sure of it.'
- NO! NOT SPIKE! lol. But seriously, cant you see the similarities between Spike and Captain Jack? Bloody, mate, love, innit... all those and more, the word usage and phrases
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Whether or not you trust someone based on whom, or rather, what they are should make no difference.
- very nice. so long as the goals are the same... right? And the motives are clear
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goths. m. awesome.
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AWesome start, drew me right in. I wonder who the new 'baddie' is. I swear I will never use that word again. lmao