Wow! This is incredible stuff! Write more, please!

Mai

Wow. That's all that can be said, really. Wow.

I'm not particularly a Jack fan, but this just blew me away. It's rationale, and it's truth, And it's Jack, and it just *hurts.*

This story is so great. They say the opposite of love isn't hate, it's apathy. You've captured that idea really well. Amazing stuff.

This was very interesting and very well written. His character seemed perfect. And I loved his conclusion at the end, regarding Irina. Great story