i love this story! it's so beautiful!

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THIS WAS AN ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC AMAZING CHILLING KEEP-YOU-ON-THE-EDGE-OF-YOUR-SEAT THRILLING MAGICAL AND EXTREMELY SAD BOOK!

I cried at the end, which is sad, but this book, it was... something else.

Your words have a flare to them, your style... it lacks... I do not know.

Your style was original, and detailed, but it lacks... true feeling, and a true connection. It's like you wrote this book to write, to release what your imagination has, but it's as if you never connected with it. Like... Oh I don't know.

That's just my interpretation.

However your book was still fantastic. Just a little dead, but no worries, that's my style anyways.

j.w why do you put astrix's (*) around some words?

This chapter reminds of the song ' Let the Flames Begin' by Paramore. I don't know why. It just does.

Love the conversation between Blue and Aspen at the end!

holy crap! i know you worte this a long time ago but i just read this know. this so freakin good! if you ever decide to be an author you would be great! ;D

i love your story thanks for putting it here for people to read

AW... poor cern... i love him btw. SUCH a perfect way to end it!

That was great!

I'm glad I found this story, cause I was always a little confused about Cern in Chimera, and also the whole Lisa/Cern relationship. Oh, I felt so bad for Lisa when she took away the memories of that moment. Do you have a story about Lisa? Or are you going to make one? It would be cool to read it, but I can understand if you don't make one, because it would be really easy to slip into a very similar plot line to Nightfire. Anyways, Darkstar intrigues me, how about writing a short fic or even a one-shot about him and Zara?

Shang Leopard

hey it was gud but a bit confusing at da beggining but itz gud

I really like ur story...i really hope those 2 learn 2 open up 2 eachother soo..they make such a sweet couple

gtg read sum more now

Liking ur story is I. Recommended by mt friends it was. gonna go read more now.

Wow! thats all i can say...wow! my friends yavanna and sunstar have been telling me to read ur stories 4 ages, but i normally only read hp stories, but I'm really glad I read urs. Expect reviews...lots of reviews! ;)

that was soo sad! i just wanted to say, i know u'r writing Chimera at the moment, so if it was possible cud u bring Jal back, some how. i'll mail u so, i can explain more. thanx

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