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BiteMeTechie
2006-04-07
ch 17,
abuseThat was lovely, it played out quite a bit like a LGM episode, bravo!
BiteMeTechie
2006-04-07
ch 10,
abuseAw geez this whole thing toward the end had me giggling like a school girl. I love this story, it's the first really good OC/Gunmen fic I've come across.
BiteMeTechie
2006-04-06
ch 3,
abuseLOL! that bit about the mystery machine was brilliant..as is everything else I've read in this fic thus far. You certainly have Langly's character down pat!
GirlX2
2005-04-04
ch 17,
abuseWonderful, inventive Fic. Make me proud to know the author.
Amy
2004-08-25
ch 17, anon.
abuseToo lazy to sign in but you know its me! *Grin* Its a fun ending; seemed almost rushed though. If it was a tv ep I could almost see the cutaways and differnt POV's making the most of the tension. Good job with that.

I thought the epilogue was cute; very James Bondish. Hurrah! Can't wait for your next fic. Giggle. I'm not being pushy, am I? *Blinks innocently*

Amy
amy jonas
2004-08-13
ch 16,
abuseSorry it took so long to read...was distracted and then Hurricane Charlie...but he dedcided to go north and after everything i did to prepare for his arrival. Oh well. lol

I'm still laughing about the disinfected killers now in fresh pine or lemon scent! I loved that lol. Another good chapter. U,m...you said you were almost done? You WILL be writing another story, right? Please?

Amy smiles
amy jonas
2004-08-02
ch 15,
abusePoor Langly and MaryPat. They just can't seem to cath a break but it sure was funny.

I walked out of the room without any sort of notion of where I was going to find rope. It would be really helpful if creepy motels, summer camps, pools and wooded areas came equipped with practical emergency supplies, like rope, phones, chainsaws, hockey masks, knives, kosher salt and holy water. That's when I heard screaming and Langly ran out of the room perfectly livid, shaking the lighter.

Yes, but when they do its because they also come equipped with their own already dead serial killers from hell! lol

Bring on the next chapter!

Amy
amy jonas
2004-07-26
ch 14,
abuseI just about died laughing. This was a really funny chapter. My favorites include:

I supposed our rescuers had decided it simply too cold for rescuing and turned around."

well ok...I could just copy the rest of the story here...but thats too much work. So, I'll just say...I loved it and I loved the interplay between Langly adn Marybeth.

"We could like make weaponry with stuff from the room!"

"We're going to complementary-mint them to death?"

LOL Bring on the molotove cocktails. This should be highly amusing!! Thanks for the great read!

Amy
Alani
2004-07-24
ch 12, anon.
abuseAt first I was annoyed with the short chapters but they are getting better. I quite like this story now.
amy
2004-07-20
ch 12, anon.
abuseAh yes, the horror of prom. I remember it well. Poor Langly. hehehe. The Carrie reference was cute.

Amy
amy jonas
2004-07-17
ch 11,
abuseHeroically challenged! Loved the chapt title. And I cracked up over this though i wasn't sure why:...every Tom, Dick and John Gilnitz in the area."

I loved Frohike and Byers interplay geussing about Langly. he's filled the bath tub with calamine lotion and hasn't moved."

"There's a story, Pink Hippie Slime Man Found in Tub."

You have an excellent sense of humor. Oh...and I didn't know about the computer thing. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Your fan,
Amy :)
amy jonas
2004-07-17
ch 10,
abusehey! *waves*

I love this: They were going to die, in a motel, in Michigan, during an oddly warm winter and be blamed for it. Next to the senior prom this was probably the worst night of his entire existence.

I'm having a lot of fun with this story. Again the interplay is beautiful

Amy
Onward to the next chapter!
amy jonas
2004-07-02
ch 9,
abuseI merely sized him up as a potential rescuer. Then I faced my inevitable doom.

That made me so crack up. And don't you apologise for Mary Pat. I absolutley loved the interplay between her and Langly. This chapter was so much fun to read. Thanks so much!

Amy
amy jonas
2004-07-02
ch 8,
abuseYou updated! *Amy hugs Milagro* sorry to hear how busy you've been, but its good to see you updating.

I love this line. Made me giggle: he was finally alone and away from all offending people and bugs.

And i really liked his love for his GPS and his clulessness with Mary pats' predicament. For such a smart guy...lol

Amy
jd burns
2003-05-31
ch 5,
abuseSo, I'm guessing that your plan was to establish Mary's storyline before you brought in the Lone Gunmen? Just wondering.
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