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cywen69
2006-08-14 . chapter 1
I just read all three parts. A very interesting take on Luke and the dinner. I also like how you put Lorelai in there. I too find it strange that the two of them never met before she got the house. The only way that that could be was if she never went into town. I don't see that happening. Plus. Luke used to do handyman stuff for Mia all the time to help her out. Just odd. It's a bit strange now that we know more of there history years later. I also thought Liz was Luke's little sister. She always refers to him as her big brother. I don't know when I first heard it though, probably after you published this. I really liked your take on everything though. Great Job!

Wendy
CripticWolf
2005-08-12 . chapter 1
Really great story. you should write more. Like different days same time period. It was great I enjoyed reading.
Leni
2004-07-28 . chapter 1
I have no words to say how *cute* this trilogy is. The little details that would be revealed later in the series, Patty's 'finally legal' comment was SO in place. Really good.

Btw, if you ever feel like making this into a quartet or a quintet or anything else, PLEASE let me know: a_d_v_v@yahoo.com.ar
Erin Kaye Hashet
2004-04-12 . chapter 1
Hey! Consider this a review for all three Luke-in-the-past stories. They're all awesome. I love Luke, too. Keep it up! I hope you write more than just fanfic!
407
2004-03-25 . chapter 1
I love Lukeness. And this story is really good. Very Lukey. All the characters are writen so well. Great job!
Ice Princess3
2003-01-19 . chapter 1
Wow that was just too perfect. You really capture all the characters well. I loved this little triology. Great job!
Haefen
2003-01-08 . chapter 1
Hey, I just wanted to tell you that I really enjoyed reading your story. This is just how a flashback episode on the actual show could be, it just fits the show so well and still it's new territory. You've done a really good job!
Javajunkie89
2003-01-07 . chapter 1
:) wondeful. purely wonderful
Tough Fluff
2003-01-07 . chapter 1
First thing first, on pimping NDG ... Dirty!

I actually re-read the story again and I gotta say, I'm proud of you, kiddo.

I cannot say I'm an expert when it comes to JJ fics or even Luke fics. But what I can say without a doubt is that this is a beautiful story. It plays out the character dynamics in a subtle fashion. Just the way I like it. Just the way it should be.

You could've made a big deal out of Luke's attire, you didn't. You could've made a big deal out of Kirk's need for a father figure, you didn't. You could've made a big deal out of Luke and Lorelai banter, but you didn't. You could've made Rory read War and Peace at a that age, but you didn't. A lesser author would've done all of the above, and ruin the story along with it.

Keep up the good work and maybe I should have gone back and check out more JJ fics.

P.S. My only regret is that you didn't made a big deal out of Iris and Chad. :sigh:
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