:( bad start already y make touya a girl y not just yaoi the whole thing?

aw, thats so cute yet sad, poor Touya!

Yoko- Really good, but would have been even better with a bit more Kurama x Hiei and some lemon!

Yukitsu- Your just as bad as Kurama...

Yoko- Arigato! .

Yumi(my oneechan)- Yoko, perverseness isn't a good thing! Except in my case...

Yoko and Yukitsu- 0.o

YAY THX!

PLZ CONTINUE!

I like story...too much plot can sometimes be bad...btw i loved this chappie especially the cuddling, SO CUTE!

Loved this chappie _

NO

I WANNA KURAMA X HIEI LEMON TO!

LEMON PLEASE! I AGREE TOTALLY WITH KURAMA!

especially kurama x hiei...i love jin x touya too tho!

i don't have an account so i cant rate but heres my email..just in case _

Hey, how did you make those wierd eyes? I want to know how to do those!

AW JIN'S IN LOVE!

Ooh now me's gonna read the next chappie

Aw my big brother's gotta GIRLfriend lol

go touya

I would have made this for chap 15 but it wouldn't let me -;. I was thinking if Touya was a krooime wouldn't there be the problem of every few years or so she would have a kid? I though of that at 1:12 in the morning and had to ask you. Could you please make a comment about it in your next chapter? Thanks!

i thought u said that u had a baby!-um i misread it...so this was ur fav fic to write?...interseting...i like that idea...espsally if it will take up to chappie 20! um plz don't take 2 months to update again!