Aww man!I'm really depressed now that it almost seams like Misty and Simon are starting to fall in love!DAMN!(cleares throught)sorry about that.

WOW!I keep getting so anticipated to read more and get scared when Simon is trying to kiss Misty.

Sweet!You're doing good with these stories and I honestly feared that they were going kiss or have sex against Misty's will.Siriously!Very anticipating.

COL! Nice story.You're going to see this face a lot,so I'll save the explanations for later.totle loo

AW.Cute,I love how you start with something like the second epesode"Pok'emon emergecy!"

This story is really good, I have been on edge since it started!!

A lovely opening to your story! Reminds me of a typical Pokemon anime episode, where Ash is eager to get to town and they stop by the Pokemon Center before challenging a gym. Brock's 'Nurse Joy' speech was pretty funny! And I can actually hear Misty's voice when she's complaining of being tired, since the dialogue you wrote for her is very in-character. I shall now proceed to chapter 2!

*sighs contentedly*

This is a very well written story. Your description is better than most. The part I enjoy so far is when everyone agreed to start their mission at Dawn... That's quite entertaining...

WAI! -does a little dance and praises Pokemon story- WHEE! that was AWESOME! do you think of writing a sequel? or something? 'cause that story rocked! ^-^

This was quite beautiful, if I may say. You have kind a knack for great characters. I truly congratulate you for this piece.
I just wonder what happened to those two siblings. I liked how Mew was portrayed here too, not to mention Ash and Misty, the real focus of the whole plot.
Team Rocket seemed more like an annoying side-story, though. They were there just to make things more complicated for the heroes, without adding much to the story, though that doesn't make this piece any bad in anything.
Your writing and descriptions have also caught my attention, and I must say I like your style.
Keep up with the good writing, my friend.
Your new fan...
--The Mewthree--

OMG that was a great story! Wow! I loved it!

I really enjoyed reading this. I can't wait to finish up the rest of these chapters.

I love your story. It's one of my favorites. I was wondering if you could do a sequal to it. I wanted to find out what happened to Mew, and if Ash will tell Misty how he feels. The story is all great, except for the ending.

Having read this from start to finish and also having promised myself an honest, unbiased opinion of its quality at the very end, this what I have to say...

KAWAI!

It's sweet, simplistic in its beauty. And I like the way you portrayed Misty and Ash's relationship. Very true to the original in that their love is still the hesitant, unspoken brand. It doesn't help matters that Mew is my favorite Pokemone either ^^'

Bravo and Bravo!
S.S.