oh that was marvelous. great job.

Wow. Very artistically written; it paints a vivid picture of the scene. Beautiful and sad.

Very beautiful and breath taking. Very realistic. I enjoyed every word.

Bittersweet, beautiful, and chocked full of emotion. Your writing is lovely; every paragraph felt powerful, especially the last few.

You write so sweetly!

thats fantastic writing! i really like it, and i like the way it makes it all so painful and beautiful.

Absolutely beautiful. Your writings never fail to amaze me.

Wow! That was packed full of detail. Very beautiful sounding, full of flow. Good job!

awww *sniffle*

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful.

awesome!

exquisitely written. :) very believable, too.

Beautiful- loved it. Some of your phrases just made me want to go 'yes, that's it!' -you have a wonderful way of expressing emotion. It was a wonderful read!

Wow! Really nice lots of details. You are probably a real good poet eh? Not a bgi Seifer and Quistis fan, but this is really nice!