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John Steppenwolf 2006-04-24 ch 4, anon.	abuse"Great, the Goren Show's back in town."- Captain James Deakins Interesting story. I have to admit it has been awhile since I read this, and like Amscray had to go and re-read this. What I'd like to know is how come it took the Preventers a long time to find out what happened to the Yuy kids. You'd think that they would be able to find them within a year or so considering how good they are. Also, I think Ja-Zell made a mistake in killing the senator. He can be of more use alive than dead. But then again the Hein is an idiot so what can you expect from someone who's not very bright. It's nice to see that Miyuki cares about her friends. Keep up the good work.
Amscray 2006-04-19 ch 4, anon.	abuse"There is one unalterable difference between a soldier and a civilian: the civilian never does more than he is paid to do."- Erwin Rommel. A decent chapter. To be honest I don't know whether or not I should be happy. I was surprised to see that you finally got around to updating this fic. Of course I had to go and re-read this fic to get up to date on this. Frankly I'm not to thrilled with this chapter, that Ja-Zell has become a prostitute. Despite the fact that she's under a mind control. Though I will admit that this is well written. In all honesty I'm not sure if I or my friends will continue reviewing this fic. We'll have to see. Keep up the good work. VY/HY forever
L.A.UNE 2005-12-01 ch 2,	abuseWhat i hope will happen with this story is that the kids get ther memories back. how i do not know the power of love. ha ha im such a sucker for that stuff. then i hope lady une will give hein one big old smacker in the jaw he he. or maybes heero. update soon.
L.A.UNE 2005-11-27 ch 1,	abusePLEASE UPDATE! this is great. update update update please.
the Iron Duke 2003-01-19 ch 3, anon.	abuseGood chapter. Couple questions: 1)What does Hein have against Victoria? Did domething happen between those two when they were younger, that he hasn't forgiven her over or what? 2)what does the last part of the story have to do with what's been going on in the story or will that come later. Well, anyways keep up the good work. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
John Steppenwolf 2003-01-18 ch 3, anon.	abuseWell, all I have to say is that I hope Hein gets his just desserts. That was a rotten thing to do. Was, kinda hoping Heero & Victoria would have more kids during the six years. This is what happens when you hang out with the Desert Fox. Keep up the good work.
the Desert Fox 2003-01-17 ch 3, anon.	abuseGood chapter. I still say Hein is a rat. A big fat smelly rat. He should be forced to listen to polka music non stop or listen to Relena ramble on about peace. Hehe-heh. So Wu-man's married to Cathy & Q-man's married to Winter. What about the others, who's their spouses. Well, keep up the good work.
Amscray 2003-01-15 ch 3, anon.	abuseGood chapter. What, only 5 people have reviewed this story? This is an injustice. I think its a good story myself. Of course, it's everyone else's loss that they don't read it. Anyways, keep up the good work. It's a really terrific story.
the Duke of Fenwick 2003-01-15 ch 3, anon.	abuseOh good another chapter is up. Interesting chapter. Let's see, so we now know who Duo's kid is, and that Wufei is married to Catherine. possibly. So what happened to Relena? Did she step down as Vice Foreign Minister? Ugh, David and Ja-Zell, now that's just gross. keep up the good work. Now to get the others to review.
Amscray 2003-01-12 ch 2, anon.	abuseOkay, I'm not going to comment about it being six years and all. However, I'm surprised that none of their former classmates didn't recognize them. I guess it had been a long time. Of course I may be missing something here. Wow. 10 reviews total, 5 per chapter. Keep up the good work.
Amscray 2003-01-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseAlright, alright I'll review. Anyways, this is a good story. Heero & Victoria make good parents. Too bad that the kids got captured. I would've thought that they got Hein & his dummies, but I guess I was wrong. keep up the good work.
John Steppenwolf 2003-01-11 ch 2, anon.	abuseGood chapter. Q: What grades are the kids in? Another Q: what were Heero & Victoria doing during the 6 years. You'd think that they would've found their kids by now. That should do it for this review. Will try and get Amscray to review.
John Steppenwolf 2003-01-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseGood story. So who is married to Cathy & has the twins? I still can't believe that Heero would let Parker take after Duo. It doesn't seem right. Well, keep up the good work.
the Duke of Fenwick 2003-01-10 ch 2, anon.	abuseSo, Hein has them under his control.The rat. Well, I hope that Heero & Victoria defeat Hein for what he did. Later
the Duke of Fenwick 2003-01-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseI say this is a really good story you have here. So, Hein escaped from the previous time? Well, keep up the good work.

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