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| Katara24 2006-08-18 ch 2,  | abusethis is preety cute! |
| twiddlekinks 2006-05-22 ch 2, | abuseM... Fruits Basket has so many delectable guys. ^_^ This is an interesting twist of events here. I think I'm going to hunt down the manga now. ;) |
| 1penhead 2005-04-05 ch 1, | abuseawsome story. really liked the plot and i hope uo and hatori end up together. they seem like a perfect couple!! |
| RavingBabbit 2005-01-03 ch 2, | abusex_X; Just my luck. I find an awesome Furuba fic and the plot bunny escaped the authoress. What ya managed to write so far was done well. >>; I'm adding this to my favorites. Just in case plot bunny hops back with your motivation. |
| miz 2004-04-08 ch 2, | abuseAw...cliffy I want to see what happens soon...asap ne? |
| nectarbug 2004-02-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseVery interesting, so far, though I'm really having trouble imagining Touru driving... Uo and Hatori would never have occurred to me (I assume that's what you're doing here), though it feels very natural, and makes perfect sense now that I think about it. I can't shake the image of Uo beating the tar out of Akito... (in the orbiting halo of stars and chirping birdies kind of way, not the aggravated assault kind of way). The little nagtag at the bottom is making me feel guilty for not finding something I think should be improved... Oh, I guess I'm not fully behind Touru suddenly bursting into tears over Kyou and Haru's squabbling. The Touru in my mind would smile and pull some relevant Mom-quote out of her butt and say how someday she hoped to have [insert quality], too, or she would become agitated herself and beg them to stop fighting. Straight to tears don't feel right. =/ |
| elffromspace 2003-05-29 ch 2, | abuseInteresting fic, and very well written. I'm not sure where you're going with it, but it will definitely be interesting to see ^_^ |
| crazybluecat 2003-04-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story is really coming along well. You write beautifully... please update soon I just have to know whats going to happen... Keep writing :) |
| Chie 2003-02-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseGreat story! Well written and grabbing! Lets hear some more! -Chie |
| Strife3 2003-02-04 ch 2, | abusewell.. another one of your fics which is lacking in updates ;) it's a pity too... this story was off to a good start i really like the hatori/arisa interaction, and i'm very interested at how the pairings will turn out.. if you decide to continue this, of course. ;) |
| hopeless 2003-01-31 ch 2, anon. | abuseinteresting dark well done different i like |
| Lady Peacecraft 2003-01-12 ch 2, | abuseGood story so far. Looking forward to reading more. Are you going to pair Tohru with Kyou? Just wondering because I love those too:) Well I will wait for the next chappie |
| Blue Tiger2 2003-01-12 ch 2, | abusekEwL...sToRy iS sOmEwHeRe dIfFeReNt dEn mOsT sToRy bUt sTiLl vErY gOoD iMaGiNaTiOn...*eSpEcIaLlY WiTh tHe UoTaNi bIt*.. vErY gOoD!!!!! heHEheHE.... ^^ |
| Silent Solitude 2003-01-11 ch 1, anon. | abusegah!!!! So *good*!!! I can't wait till the next chapter. *squeals* I love the Hana-Uotani-Tohru friendship going on here. |
| Ohimesama 2003-01-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat start! Love the angsty drama and touch of reality you got going there. Hope Tohru recuperate *sniffles* and love how you got Ha-san, Hana, Uo and the others in character for the most part ^_^ and is it just me or are sparks about to fly b/t the reserved doc and the unrefined yankee *^^* (never considered it but who knows you can change my mind) Ganbatte! |