It's a great story so far and you managed to keep everyone in character...

PLEASE write some more! Please!

this is preety cute!

M... Fruits Basket has so many delectable guys. _ This is an interesting twist of events here. I think I'm going to hunt down the manga now. ;)

awsome story. really liked the plot and i hope uo and hatori end up together. they seem like a perfect couple!

x_X; Just my luck. I find an awesome Furuba fic and the plot bunny escaped the authoress.

What ya managed to write so far was done well. ; I'm adding this to my favorites. Just in case plot bunny hops back with your motivation.

Aw...cliffy I want to see what happens soon...asap ne?

Very interesting, so far, though I'm really having trouble imagining Touru driving...
Uo and Hatori would never have occurred to me (I assume that's what you're doing here), though it feels very natural, and makes perfect sense now that I think about it. I can't shake the image of Uo beating the tar out of Akito... (in the orbiting halo of stars and chirping birdies kind of way, not the aggravated assault kind of way).
The little nagtag at the bottom is making me feel guilty for not finding something I think should be improved... Oh, I guess I'm not fully behind Touru suddenly bursting into tears over Kyou and Haru's squabbling. The Touru in my mind would smile and pull some relevant Mom-quote out of her butt and say how someday she hoped to have [insert quality], too, or she would become agitated herself and beg them to stop fighting. Straight to tears don't feel right. /

Interesting fic, and very well written. I'm not sure where you're going with it, but it will definitely be interesting to see _

This story is really coming along well. You write beautifully... please update soon I just have to know whats going to happen... Keep writing :)

Great story! Well written and grabbing! Lets hear some more!

-Chie

well.. another one of your fics which is lacking in updates ;)

it's a pity too... this story was off to a good start

i really like the hatori/arisa interaction, and i'm very interested at how the pairings will turn out.. if you decide to continue this, of course. ;)

interesting

dark

well done

different

i like

Good story so far. Looking forward to reading more. Are you going to pair Tohru with Kyou? Just wondering because I love those too:) Well I will wait for the next chappie

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gah! So *good*! I can't wait till the next chapter. *squeals*

I love the Hana-Uotani-Tohru friendship going on here.