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Reviews for: All the Right Words
Rumiko Nadajima
2003-08-04 . chapter 1
Yo, Gakusha! ^^ Your loyal seito Bez here. I can't believe i only managed to read this fic now. *goes all dreamy* So nice...it really is!

Oh yeah, i just started my fic Unreal. I'm hoping to archive it at the shrine, cos Fujima is(obviously) one of the main characters. You can find it here on FFN, under this account. One chapter up only so far, though. Well, that's all from me for now. You can reach me anyway - babble club, email, whatever. Ja ne!
Perfectly Vain
2003-03-20 . chapter 1
nice... i'm bored... my eyes landed on your fic. I have a couple of unfinished SD fics that're probably rotting away in my computer...

-_-'' I like your work. I like Fujima- he's cool ^-^ lol
murderer
2003-01-11 . chapter 1
fujima... cool... he's swearing... ^^ The story was marvelous! Left me staring at it with awe... I. Need. More. :D HanaFuji/FujiHana rulz!!! ::waddles away with keyboard clutched against her chest::
Rings Of Saturn
2003-01-10 . chapter 1
Hey, I think the storyline is interesting, though the first few lines were a bit confusing (I have no idea about anythign to do with hosiptals). Anyway, you are not going to continue? I want to know what Fujima said to Hanagata when he saw him. Great story!
immagina
2003-01-09 . chapter 1
whoa... this fic... is short but really intense. you are able to keep the action intact that made it fast-paced. ^______^ good job you got there. just avoid repeating on the word "**" and the dialogue, "i was scared shitless..." because when the character said it, the readers already understand what he mean by that. altough it's good having some repetitions at times, you must avoid -too- much of it. express the dialogue in other words. ^_____^ anyweiz... other than that, this fic really rocks. one those very few hanafuji keeper. keep on writing!
Rhoe
2003-01-08 . chapter 1
Saw this at Babble.

Two words.

I like!

~suegarbaby
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