   darkaznangel452 2008-03-05 . chapter 8AWW...how romantic. i totally loved it. now i'm off to read some of your other stories.
ariana |
 meow114 2008-01-06 . chapter 8can you write a sequel? |
 X5 - 452 and 494 2007-04-08 . chapter 8Love it! |
| lightrain 2006-08-26 . chapter 1 Hi, I love reading great stories that are complete. It's such a great soothing story that brings out the best in both Max and Alec. It really displays their chemistry, which I'd always longed for there to be more scenes of in the show. Thanks for the treat! |
| Dragon89 2006-07-27 . chapter 8 It was ** great honestly. I so want a sequel please |
 Amy-Loves-Adam 2006-07-13 . chapter 8Hey is this story going to update or is their a sequel please tell me the name cos i would love to read more :) luv ami wilson |
 DA4life 2006-06-04 . chapter 1'Tell Logan to suit up, pack some bleach, and it's off to rubber-encrusted paradise.”' hehe im sorry i must of consumed too much coffee but this line just cracks me up! no matter how many times i read it i just burst out laughing.
thanx 4 that |
| angeleyes452 2006-05-30 . chapter 8 Oh My Goodness that was totally amazing. I loved every chapter. Well done your a star. Kelly x. |
| Luc Star 2005-02-11 . chapter 8 Nice story. hope you bring out a sequel. And i really liked the way you explained everything in detail. later. |
| Freakage 2004-01-01 . chapter 8 This is such a sweet story. Great job! |
| Natasqi 2003-11-05 . chapter 9 YAY.. oh i am so envious of people who actually finish their fics!
this was great!! oh, such a M/A fan!! E!!
it's so happy.. and romantic.. sigh.. if only...
anyway!! thank you so much for that!! keep writing!
N@ |
| Tash 2003-07-06 . chapter 9 I loved this story as we got 2 see alec open up more hope u do other stories liked this one |
| vesu 2003-06-08 . chapter 4 So WHO was Elliot? when did Alec meet him on that mission? It would have nice to see you go into more deatail. I love how you're bringing up Alec's past missions. Those are always very interesting to read about^_^ |
| vesu 2003-06-08 . chapter 3 I loved this story. But the part about a massage and THEN skiing I don't think was very realistic. Massages make you very tired after you get one, and if you went skiing after you could get yourself killed. massages loosen your muscles but then the skiing would tense them up again. The order just didn't really make sense to me.
Great story though! |
| vesu 2003-06-08 . chapter 1 really great so far but i wished you wrote it in the 3rd person. you seem to be shifting back and forth b/w 1st and 3rd |
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