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| Ewanlover64 2007-05-06 ch 1, | abuseVery sad. I loved it. :) |
| MissPennyworth 2006-10-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseClassy. My friend, you always deliver. This picky reader is %110 satisfied. |
| Starfirenz 2006-06-27 ch 1, | abuseHey there I've just been introduced to 24 fandom and had your story recced to me by Catch22girl. I really like your characterisation of Jack in this one - the way he's not-quite-struggling to come to terms with everything - the grief, the confusion, the need for things to have gone differently. I also like the characterisation of Tony - he was one of the characters I always found myself wanting to know more about while I was watching, and I'm keeping an eye out for well written Tony-centric fic now. Best wishes Starfire |
| Grym 2006-03-27 ch 1, | abuseStumbled over this little gem via a Google search for S1-S2 24 fanfic. I've only begun watching this brilliant show (in S3 on DVD at the moment) and the LAST thing I need to be doing is reading fanfic that might spoiler ANYTHING. Don't know what got into me -- but I'm thrilled it did. This is beautiful, tortured, and rings utterly true to the characters and the feel of the show. I read it in that breathless silence that comes from finding words that truly capture emotion, moments, silences. Only when finished, did I glance up to see the author's name. And chuckled. "Of course it is. Alicia, who else?" Didn't know what fandoms had swallowed you up since your Authority fic days. Glad to have found you again. :) Masterful, as always. |
| guiltytexan 2006-02-19 ch 1, | abuseAw! as a brand- new (just bought and watched season one) fan of 24, I'm so glad I found this story, it's wonderful! |
| Kalena 2003-12-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow that was good! Very powerful... |
| Cherazz22784 2003-12-10 ch 1, | abuseGood story. Good idea for the Tony & Jack convo...You should definitely write more 24. Good job! |
| Kellifer Monkey 2003-11-27 ch 1, | abuseI loved this story, it was brilliantly written and expressed a side of Jack I wished the show would go into a lot more. I hadn't written anything for a couple of years and it sparked me into life again, when I really needed an outlet. So many thanks for sharing such a wonderfully written story. |
| Stargazer83 2003-08-21 ch 1, | abuseThis was sweet, without being too corny. I would have liked Jack to be a bit more suicidal or dazed, but I like this this one anyways. the best 24 fic I've read so far. I guess Tony really would be the only person jack could talk to. And I just smiled at the end. THe first real smile today. thank you. |
| Yvonne 2003-07-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, I loved this one. And you know what? It was my first (okay second) 24 fanfic ever! And to start with such a finely written one - perfect. I loved how you described the characters and their feelings. Very believable. God, I feel like crying. I wish you would write more 24 fics! I also read 'Silence and Tears' and it was as good as this one, just WAY too short. *g* Thanks for writing these stories! |
| JAV1 2003-07-03 ch 1, | abuseShort and sweet. |
| Vera Steine 2003-07-01 ch 1, | abuseWow! Great characterization! I really liked this story, thought it was very believable. Good work! |
| Ira Gaines 2003-05-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. I like this. You got the suicidal thoughts across very well. (You weren't writing from experience were you?) You wrote the memories well, and you even spelled all the characters names correctly. - Ira Gaines "Either you're dead, or you're not. You can;t be sorta dead. Here, let me show you." |
| Naursul 2003-02-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was so. good, and heartbreaking. You really captured the characters, I could picture them very clearly carrying out this scene. I really love this; I'm putting it in my favorite stories. Thanks for the great read! N. |
| Colly E. 2003-01-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was good. I always wanted it to come out that they became friends after all that. I like your fic. You do good at writing the characters. thanx! |