Ep... I love it!

The use of imagery in this poem is really nice - very sad. I'm not that great with reviews, but I definitely liked it.

Short, but very pretty! You've captured the elves' thoughts so perfectly without having to be long-winded. It might be neat to expand on, too. :)

Oh! I really really like this. The imagery is excellent. Very... elf-like... in that way that's so very beautiful and mysterious.

I must admit, I'm a little bit jealous.

Nice work!

Lil Loki Puck/Tinwen Vilyadil