 Bishopx 2008-09-30 . chapter 7This just keeps getting better. I wish I'd seen it sooner. Keep it up. I can't wait to start the next section. |
 Wytil 2004-09-18 . chapter 7First, I am not a particular fan of Batman, etc.
I do like Redemption and HP. Shame you fixed that series up with almost total closure, unless you want to skip ahead a few years. That way if you decide that Harry 'had' a girlfriend/wife you can skip forward to where he is dealing with the children of his and his 'former(?)' friends.
As for this, interesting that you are dealing with the same kind of exile/return concepts. Handling them quite well too. Any relation to reality? |
 ghostninja85 2004-04-30 . chapter 7I'm not sure I agree with you about Jack Drake. He doesn't want Tim working as a vigilante because he's worried about him. However, it's your story, so it's entirely up to you. I did like Exile 2. |
 arsenal13 2003-02-02 . chapter 2I really like these exile stories. I'm curious how his father found out he was robin though. Keep up the good work. These are great stories. |
 Ghost in the Machine 2003-01-22 . chapter 7While I find the idea of Jack Drake ignoring his son for three years perfectly acceptable, I have problems with Dana ignoring her step-son for that time period. It's something that's been bugging me.
I wasn't expecting Dana to be clingy, but is she so spineless that she let her husband cut HER off from Tim as Jack did to everyone else? It just doesn't feel right. |
 mic 2003-01-21 . chapter 7 Once again, I totally loved this. The relationship between Tim and his father is really sad, but it's what makes this such a great angst fic ;P Dana was very sweet, and the relationship between Tim and the rest of the clan is developed very nicely. The story flows really well...the only complaint I have is that... I WANT MORE!! I can't wait for the next series. Reunion with YJ? Oh my, I cannot wait!! |
 TDX 2003-01-21 . chapter 7I continue to be impressed with this story. I can’t wait to read the next part.-TDX |
 Gaeriel Mallory 2003-01-20 . chapter 7Whoo hoo! I love this story. :) It started off a bit slow, but you managed to bring it back up to pace by the fourth or fifth chapter. Looking forward to Exile 3. |
 Fusion Blaster 2003-01-20 . chapter 7ooooooh
Reunion with the former Young Justice
WOOT!
Can't wait for that. |
 Appreciative reader 2003-01-20 . chapter 6 You go ahead and write as many chapters as you want. Reading this is like sampling a box of expensive chocolates--chapter after smooth chapter disappears like magic. Supremely satisfying! |
 Fusion Blaster 2003-01-19 . chapter 6ooooooooh
Now i really have to read the next one.
Tim is just about to let loose the dogs of hell now. |
 Zelda 2003-01-18 . chapter 5 I can't wait for the next chapter |
 nanashi 2003-01-17 . chapter 5 Oh...wow. I wasn't expecting *that*. Which is good, because you're supposed to throw us readers off, but...it's just so damn sad!! I think Bruce will agree with me here when I say I want to slap Jack Drake silly for hurting poor lil' Timmy both physically *and* emotionally.
Can't wait for the final chapter! |
 none 2003-01-17 . chapter 5 WOO HOO! Jack Drake bashing! |
 Ghost in the Machine 2003-01-17 . chapter 5This reminds me of something I see fairly often in Ranma fanfiction. Demonization. Jack Drake is a bad father. I don't see the need to add negative traits to his character just to make people hate him more. He's pathetic enough already.
Bash him for what he already is. |