Oh my...this was so beautiful *sniff.. sniff * this one's now on my favs, well done :)

that(sobs)was(sobs)so(sobs)beutiful(runs off crying)

Aww! I love this little story so much! It goes perfectly with the song, and .. man .. it was awesome! I love it! Hehe, it was so well written, I almost cried, ahaha, but I'm an easy crier in movies and things like that. :P I loved it! :)

So cute . It made my cry happy tears. Please write more Goten and Gohan stuff!

Aw!
*sobs*
Goten and Gohan are the best...
Tear-jerking stuff, that...

CUTE! *glomps Goten and Gohan* And you picked a favorite song of mine. I was singing along cause I'm a Lion King dork. Or just a dork in general, maybe. _ I loved this and it's going on my favorites list.

thats was a cool story

That was so kawaii! . I'll add it to my favorites.

Aww that was cute! I love Goten when hes little. Hes soo clueless! -

Cutie pie Gohan/Goten, my favorite. The funny thing is... I can't STAND Gokou, but I love Goten and Gohan to bits. Extremely well written and cute. I have yet to see Goten when he's not fighting (I've only seen the Cell and Frieza sagas and a couple scenes from the WMAT so far) I love the song and it fits the two well. Very very well. Impressive.

very good...i really liked it alot...goten is so cool and i liked it alot Son family forever

I like it._ its sweet I DESPISE GOHAN woops that slipped sorry _'

But Goten is really cute! Pleasecheck out my fic if you want! Good work!

Oh I really liked the end, that was so cute and appropriate.

awww...goten is the most cutest thing ever! *hugs goten plushie* This fic was soo kawaii! I just love these goten and gohan stuff thingies..._ And yea...goten is a lot like his father...in lotsa different ways. But he's too kawaii and innocent u just can't help but love the little guy! _ and Gohan too...*drools* hehe...keep it up!

That... *sob* ... was so KAWAI! The song 'He lives in you' is really great and you made it even better!