when are you going to finish the story Nemesis.

Pleas o God you have to keep going pleas!

when are you going to finish the story.

I luv this! are u gonna continue? Please say yes...X3

please try to finish this story.

Woot! LOL. I'm so happy to see you writing again! I'm sorry I didn't reply earlier, I don't check my email as often as I should. And on Halloween anyways I was getting married. hehe. I read the chapters, but I think I forgot the whole story! I'm going to have to go back and reread methinks.

I hope you find the time to get the next one up soon! I wish I could get back into writing, but I can't for some reason..

Keep writing,
V

Ah! Please update soon!

...Is it Turles?! Or...however you spell his name?!

This whole suspense thing has got me all jittery. A beautiful story, truly!

Rough around the edges (then again, you are writing about a race of really rough individuals) but wonderful! I really like it. Anything with Veggie and Carrot head I like, though... I can't wait for more!

please try to finish this story.

Glad they got their revenge on the Bateau.

Worried Vegeta is still weak, especially with Frieza around and Zarbon having his eye on him. Somehow I don't think Zarbon will be put off by Vegeta being mated.

Oh, who is the father? Very intriguing. Turles? Hmm, doesn't seem powerful enough. I'm thinking Brolli as it's AU and you can change the time sequence. If he is it may explain Kakarot being SS.

I was happy to know you updated this story. It had been so long that I had to re-read it. Suprised to find out Bardock is mated to such an aggresive male, who by the way I think is Turles. Am I right? UPDATE SOON:)

please try to finish the story.

ME LOVE! i hope you are alive and update so I can finish reading this attention grabbing story! patiently waiting!

Kei^^

co'mon writte more i'm dying plz write more

please finish this story because i want to know what happen next.okay nemesis!