it's deep and nice thinking of using the translated lyric for sekai ga omaruma dewa (until the world comes to an end)

*smiles* Nice...

I like your plot.. your descriptions are great.. very profound thoughts, although sometimes there were realy deep.. way too deep for me _" ehehe... *laughs sheepishly*

About the plot.. ne, I dont really believe in SenRu, so I might be a little biased.. but it fitted in really well with the lyrics.. _ Nice and angsty. hehee..

Mmmm.. an observation that I made though was that you seem to be mixing up some of your tenses.. just a note _

But anyway, nice work.. ganbatte ne!