Reviews for Like Father, Like Daughter

gracienalanii
2004-08-28
ch 1,

abuseThis has to be the most confusing story I've written in a long time. There were so many breaks I couldn't tell what was happening, who was who, where in time each section was taking place, and how history was changed. New characters were introduced without any explanation. Plus, there was almost no detail, only dialogue. I wish this didn't have to be a flame as a review... I hate writing these... but, please, get a beta reader, or writing lessons, or something!

RavenMD
2003-02-19
ch 1, anon.

abuseI´ve been enter to your fanfiction more than 5 times hoping that you write a new chapter. Please

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