This was a really great story, however, one bit of constructive criticism. Well, two, really.

A). You ought have mentioned the crossover at the bottom, or top. Not all of us youngsters know who the A Team are!

B) I did a double take when reading some of the lines over again, and had to go back. It threw me for a loop until I realized that it was symbolizing another's thoughts. After that, I was far too on-my-toes about who was thinking. Perhaps some sort of divider, to acknowledge this?

All-in-all, it was great.

okay, i'm confused. who are the two people and which doctor is it?

I thought this story was really good...the double scenes, each with the different points of view, didn't so much as make it boring (as someone said) but just really really long. I must admit, tho, I had no idea who the man was until the Team came in.

Ah, how wonderful. This is one I'm going to keep. Well done job.

Cool! The A-Team! I hate to say it but it gives me in idea.

The character of Marc I made up-8th Doctor companion-I figured figuring out it was the A-Team would be the easy part...I wasn't so sure about the Doc part... : )

Ok, not bad. I actually guessed that it was an A-Team cross over, but I thought it was Hannibal who was locked up with her. Who was the companion. The Doctor called her Marc, but there's never been a companion of that name in the series?

While it was a totally cool setting and plot, and written really well, I think by doing each scene twice it made it too boring. I was bored as soon as I realized I had to read everything doubled, even though doing it from both points of view was good. Just trying to be honest here. _

Somewhere between art and the happy medium, I think! Thumbs up all the same - I have no idea who Face is or what show(?) he's from, and yet I enjoyed it all the same :)

It's amazing who you bump into in a jail cell, isn't it? Brilliant story - although, admittedly it's been quite a while since I watched 'the other show'. Excellent read - well done.